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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What kind of bastard forgets that he is on the phone!? Yami really is stupid. ^.^ Anyway, I love your fan fiction. Keep it up!!!
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH....it all makes sence now. good job.
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shower fun shower fun! Great job! So is Malik, completely gay, or bi? Just wondering, heh. Great job, good luck with your update!
~Bambi
~Bambi
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Humm... I liked this chapter. Can't wait for the update. ^_^ Ja~
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Who's on the phone?? Lol, great update, can't wait for tonights chap.
~Bambi
~Bambi
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fabulous fic man!!
i can't believe it was your first lemon, so well written!
poor ryou though... i don't recall akura having used lube...
i can't believe it was your first lemon, so well written!
poor ryou though... i don't recall akura having used lube...
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that is just tooo cute. i loved Malik's reaction, and then he just sort of blew it off for food.
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Ryou's a screamer, eh? interesting. well, this was pretty good for your first time tingting one. I liked it. But now I must go do some chores before my mom rips my head off. ja~
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there ^^
The fic cam out good. You did good on your first time with a lemon fic. ^_^
I only caught jus just few mistakes. But, to me they are minor ones.
If you would like to ask me what mistakes I found please be free to e-mail me!
I can't til you continue the fic and I like to see what happens when Malik finds out that screaming was Ryou *grins*
update soon
Moztartz_Ballad
The fic cam out good. You did good on your first time with a lemon fic. ^_^
I only caught jus just few mistakes. But, to me they are minor ones.
If you would like to ask me what mistakes I found please be free to e-mail me!
I can't til you continue the fic and I like to see what happens when Malik finds out that screaming was Ryou *grins*
update soon
Moztartz_Ballad
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol, a woman! Nope, Ryou's no woman! Great update, and your lemon was fine! You say it sucked?? My first was in "Deeper Than You Know", now THOSE sucked ass! Well great job, update soon.
~Bambi
~Bambi