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for Seduction of Ice

by Telpei

person White Wolf
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woah! I like the whole party thing, although the theme was a little predictable. Nice costume descriptions. The blues in Seto's costume had something to do with the fact he has a Blue-Eyes White Dragon, right? Well, that's my theory. I noticed Bakura was eyeing Yami. Lets see now... What could that lead to? Hmm.....
*coughYami/Seto/Bakuralemoncough*
^_^
PleasepleasepleasepleasePLEASE update!

-White Wolf
person Shakster
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have an art at being completely evil.....but I liked the chapter nonetheless.....
person Kat
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was good! La, Seto was something to drool over (okay, he almost always is!)! Jou and Yami's costumes sound yummy tooe one only possible pairings I saw were Yugi and Ryou, or *squints* umm... no, not Mokuba and Jou... nah. Oh... shark-fin hair??? *cracks up* Loved that!
person Ravid
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bakura/Jou perhaps? *crickets* well.... the story was good (even though my guess is wrong) so keep it up!
person Les
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY RA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY THE ABYSS DID YOU HAVE TO STOP THERE?!!!! MY RA!!!!!!!!! NOW I CAN'T SLEEP!!!!!!!!!! >_< man...
person Shakster
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter... I can't wait for the update.
person Kat
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... some dream!!! What pictures does Mokuba have?!?! I can't wait to find out about the costumes. As for not mentioning the party in the last review... I was, uhhhh, distracted! I can't even begin to guess about what the theme is. I'm just gonna sit back and see what mischief you cause. At least, once I quit laughing over Yugi's behavior.... evil little thing! *cack Kat
person tiki
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARE YOU SERIOUS? THERE'S NO MORE! ARGHHHH THAT WAS SO GOOD ^^ hyuk hyuk anyways, love the story and the plot and the YUM. (: keep it up! hope you post another chapter soon.
person Santurion
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Things are getting more interesting with each chapter, ne? I bet Seto is going to have "heart attack" when he sees Yami at the party! *giggles*
person penguin fo evil
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
he he he.another chapter^-^I am so happy.this story is so cute.i love seto\yami.I cant wait for lemon^-^YAY.

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