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by Suya

person alostblackcat
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i didn't get to finish my review.........

anyways...

this was such a cool story!!!!!!!!

hehe

your a great writer, please write more
person FunkMeister
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Christ.

That was a rather disturbing edge on it all, but wonderfully written. You write sex scenes just fine, though my sympathy would have made it less cruel. The ruthlessness is impressed, expressed in a fantastic way. Good stuff.
Lurve,
FunkMeister.
person Santurion
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Altough I don't like, when someone is forced, but this one was *very* good. So only thing I can say is *wow*. Maybe you can write a sequel, where Joey and Duke make up? If you want to. Anyway, good job!
person Shakster
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW.........


I'ad aad a bad experience reading a lot of Joey/Duke stories in the past, because a lot of author's focus too much on Joey being Duke's puppy dog. But this story was....

Amazing......

Truly amazing. It was well written, calculated, committed. Gorgeous, actually. In a slightly dark way. I'm actually disappointed it ended though... Now that Duke's broken I have to wonder what will become of him. I havt ret read a story that well done in a couple of weeks, so this was a pleasent treat before class. When Joey took Duke after he made him beg it just felt.... Perfect. (I know I probably sound like a heartless bitch) Anwyay, this was pretty nice. I'd be up to reading a sequel, but either way, as a stand alone fic, this was very very good. And I really really enjoyed it.

My reviews are never this long... But I just wanted you to know that I really liked this a lot. I actually am adding it to my Rec. reading list. ^_^
person Joey Fanatic
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh.
My.
God.
This is BRILLIANT.
This is THE best dark Joey story I have EVER seen. EVER.
This is the part where I beg you to write more stuff like this.
This is NOT a story that deserves flames.
This is a story that deserves an armful of awards.
PLEASE KEEP WRITING JOEY-CENTRIC STUFF!!!

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