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by rayemars

person dogmatix
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Feeling very sorry for poor Ryou and dearly want to smack Bakura. *whuff* I just finished the previous chapter and read the note for this one and thought I'd comment(and if you have this in a later chapter, I apologize for wasting your time ^.^;; ). 'Pharaoh' ~is~ an Egyptian word. It's originally 'per a'a', or 'the great house', and meant the palace, not so much the god-king. By the New Kingdom(which is roughly 3000 years ago and when Yami would have been on the throne), 'per a'a' had become shorthand for the person - the god-king - who lived ~in~ the palace.
person Elys
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My GOD! you have to undiscontinu this! PLEASE (Puppydog eyes) PLEASE?????????????????????????? i will give you my undieing love if you do! (not that you really would want it) I love all of your stories! please???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? it's so inresting, you must contenu. please?!
person Elys
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it! you must undiscontune this story! please! this is the most beliveable story that i've ever read! please???????
person Elys
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
P.S.
i'll shoot my self if you don't continu, J/K but please! you must up date!
person aramis_chan
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing... I think it’s the best, most believable (if you can call it that, I mean I do now think that this is exactly what happened to them) Ryou-Bakura I ever came across (together with “Possessionem Regis”).
person Tjay
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you have to finish this... please don't stop! I really like it! *begs*
person Kamikakushi
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gawd...I truly love this fic... It's so well written, save for the irritating English names...But other than that, it's definately one of my favourite YGO fics of all time! ^^; I wish there were a little more lemon scenes, though...
person day dreamer
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is exellent! I enjoy it muchly but its rather depressing when you read it all at once.
person letainajup
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOORAY! I'm so glad you've updated! Poor Ryou, he needed more camera time in the anime - that's why I love that you're going by the story in a way and ellaborating on the scenes! Can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite stories and I hope you update soon! I love your writing style--quite creative and interesting. I also like your take on Ryou and Bakura's relationship, very intense and involved.

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