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May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far. I really like the plot. Keep writting!
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dear gods. JIPPY!!!! Ryou is all happy and very alive again. JIPPY AGAIN!!!!!!!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sigh! Everything turned out well, for good luck..still, it makes one wonder *what* exactly Yami and Bakura did to Charlie's men-hmm, I can see a very painful, gruesome death ahead for Charlie-good riddance! And Ryou is just soo..cute! He's so sweet, he'd make the perfect plushie!^^
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo... cant wait till the next chappy, update soon!^^
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooo...yay! ryou-kun is safe^^ of course, 'cause the_great_wonderful_bakurasgirl is writing it^^
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think I see Bakura gutting Charlie a few years down the road and having the help of his friend.
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh!! Holey shit!!!! Ok, so, this goes somewhere before Nanny Bakura huh?? I hate cliffies!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lady Elfskye
Lady Elfskye
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Hayden's sister?? Will she show up in your other fic?? Or did I miss something??
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just imagined Jou's face, when Bakura put Jacob's ear to his head-that was rather disgusting, I must agree. Still, it's nice to see, that Ryou is still alive, even if he's in a whole lot of trouble. Oh, and I love Tristan 'Holmes', very cool, very smart, very sneaky. 'Bite me' straight into an angry Bakura's face? Takes guts to do so, I must give him that. Nice to see you updating this story so regularly, I wish, I could say the same about mine..^^°
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O This is really excellent. More plot than you usually see in AFF.net stories, and it's gorgeously written. I like your characterization of Jou, and Ryou was cute! ^^ (no matter what he's doing, I think that kid is cute).
I really like this, and I haven't even gotten to the yaoi yet XD
I really like this, and I haven't even gotten to the yaoi yet XD