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Poor Joey has a long way to go and so does Seto from the looks of it.

Me: whoa, i totally forgot about tis story
Yami: u need a slap koi?
Me: no
Yami: lol, a little bit of lime right there
Me: not a lot though
Joey: when r u going 2 put me and moneybags for a lemon?
Seto: u want a lemon? Here: *gives Joey a lemon*
Me: *laughs* nice one seto
Yami: oh, its the priest
Seto: *glares at Yami* U AREN'T THE PHAROH! IT'S YUGI'S YAMI WHO'S DA PHAROH!
Joey & Me: *leaves room quickly*
Yami: lol, whatever u say PRIEST!
Seto: *growls and looks around* where's the puppy?
Yami: augh! they left!!!
Seto: PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!!
Seto & Yami: *leaves room*

YD: Damn! That's just screwed up!
DD: Poor Joey. It's going to be a long, difficult road.

u make ryou sound so cuddly! oh i just want to snuggle him, but, i'll leave that to u and bakura^^
i hope jou get his act together quickly, this inspires me...hm...yes....any way, great fic, keep going^^

Yuji: Two timer. You love both Ryou and Joey and still kiss only Ryou
Yumi: Well I bet he'll do it with Joey so I bet Joey won't mind for very long
Yuji: I guess but
Yumi: What is it? i: Ii: Is Bakura ever going to be nice to Ryou?
Yumi: I have absolutely no clue
Yuji: Well than please update soon bakurasgirl!!!
Yumi: UPDATE!!!

love isn't about hurting. love is about caring. i hope that they can make it through the flashbacks.

lady elfskye

(Rubs herself against bakurasgirl's legs and purrs) meeoww, I like your writing style, and you do very nice relationship focuses, too, Keep writing!^^

(loud riotious clapping) Well Done! Well Done! (wildly cheering fans) More! More!

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Arrghh!!!!!!!! What a mix-up! Dang!! MORE SOON!! I love reading the "reason why" stuff.

Lady Elfskye