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for Racing my back

by Fel5

person Rurouni_agra
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL, this is GREAT! I'm lovin your fic, don't know how i missed it until now...maybe I'm just blind to good fic untill their 15 chapters long >.< I am an idiot. Anyway, add another eagrly awaiting fan to you list. Be sure to torture Jou for me *grin*
person Lee J.T. Lynn
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the story! Fantastic! I sat down and started into the first chapter, and then I simply couldn't stop rea -- -- I had to finish it! (And this is the first time I've ever sat down and read an entire multi-chapter story, so my hat's off to you, Felidae-san!) I especially love this one because I'm a Jounouchi fan, have been since day one. Tossing in the Jou/Kaiba action was just icing on the cake for me. I hope to read the next chapter as soon as you're able to have it up here. ^-^
person Saelbu
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so cool!! I'm so glad you updated especially with so many chapters at once. Can't wait to next the next chapter, ja! ^_^
person Kat
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeals and glomps Felidae* You're back!! *claps* And you brought a great chapter with you! I can't wait to see what the costume is! Why did Kanashimi show up? *snickering* Why do I think it has something to ith ith the "count"? La, missed ya and glad you're back!


KB
person kat
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*hugs Felidae until she turns blue* Not only did you update, but 4 fricken chapters! Gods, when I came home and saw the other three I just about screeched the roof off!! I'm just gonna load all three reviews here. *smirks*

*falls over laughing* Jouno-yasha?! I love it! Just the right thing for torture. Dayum, that boy has hollow everything, forget just the leg. *shakes head* No one offered to use a dump truckfeedfeed him?

"Or is there a reason you’re always being such a prissy bitch?" OOOOOOOO ten points for Jou!!!

"closing the distance between them and capturing the CEO’s lips with his own in a chaste, heated kiss." *cracks up* Oooo nice planning on Kanashimi's part! He deserves a prize for that lay-up. Oh wait, he's kissing Kaiba. Prize given! *cackles*

"It was basically like kissing a log."
"Kaiba still stared at the massive bulge in his pants"
*howls* bump on a log! *falls over laughing*

*cracks up and applauds* Way to go Jou, stealing his orgasm! Wow, there's something I never imagined saying!

Loved it, loved it, loved it. Everything was so worth the wait! I undend: nd: patience needed now. *smirks*

KB
person Saelbu
schedule August 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you're back and writing again, and I can't wait to read more. ^_^
person Kat
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"but those staircases are really chilly to lie on" Not to mention, so not always clean. *innocent look*

*snickers* Wow, way to go nailing Seto, Jou. Hell of a way to make the guy listen, that's for sure. Just sooo typically Jou though.

“What do you know about loneliness, you stupid dog?" Ooooo he cracked the shell! Shiit, I actually started going all "aww poor thing" when I read this line.

"You need a..companion, a soulmate, with whom you can share even your deepest secrets and wishes, who understands you right..here.” Jou, that's super deep! Extremely true as well.

Yorokobi: delight, a very fitting name for a mall, if you ask me *cracks up* Amen!

Great chapter and I can't wait to see how Seto deals with Kanashimi. That oughta be fun.

KB
person Kat
schedule June 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"although the thought of a gothic Jou and ‘normal’ Jou doing the nasty is quiet appealing" *stops and thinks for an hour then picks mind up out of gutter* Appealing?! Hell, it'd be fricken' fantastic!

“Just make sure you’re on time, I hate eating cold Ramen!”
*cracks up* Sweet comeback!! He would kick bul bully's ass(I used to do that as a little girl, shhhhhh). I knew there was a reason I like Jou so much!

"Especially if one of the victims was bound to a wheelchair for the rest of his life."
*gasps* Duuuude.... *blinks* ahem. Damn!

*laughs* You would bring back Seto in the last two sentences!! ahh, I'm so glad you're back!

KB - Still thinking of a gothic Jou and normal Jou doing the nasty.... ;-)
person Saelbu
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated, I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
person Kat
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"....when Katsuya’s eyes went dark and void.
“Apologize.”

Ooooo go get 'im Puppy!! Woohoo!

Great chapter! *blinks* I'll be patient about Kaiba's part in this game because it's so much fun to see the interaction between Kanashimi and Jou. Seriously, it's a great story!

KB

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