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for You Look Marvelous

by Reppa

person smily
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOH OOOOOOH A LEMON BETWEEN THEM SOUNDS GOOD, PLUS, LOVED THE FIC!
person Sushi
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good fiction. =D Of course you need a PWP as an ending. LOL. They need to hook up somehow. ;) Well more than they did. Loved the story though.
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LEMON!!!!!!!!!!!!
person deadghost
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yes, please please pretty, pretty... make a lemon...

It was a good story, and what a better "thank you for reading my fic" present for your fellow readers than a good lemon?
At least I would like it.
Loved yor story, bye
person Kschur32
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please do the next chapter.
person Raven Rae
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That story just needs to end with something else then that, specially for what they were both thinkthe the middle of it all.
I loved it but it needs a lemon in it to be perfect, not that it aint right now
person Denisse
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why??????? WHYYYYYYYYYYYY don't you continue ..................-_-.....................
person Jounouchi Katsuya
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... Will you put Seto/Jou together? Will you?!?! *cries* Very good story and wonderful plot so far! Please continue! *luffs lemons as well* Could you do that?! If you do could you make it Seto/Jou?! *ish a complete hentai* Pwease?!
person random reader
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh it cannot be that easy. ^^;; *can't wait*
person Denisse
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations!!
This Fic is a lot more realist than the previous one you've done.... I like it a lot. "Kiss my hand at my comand" had good sex scenes but I really disliked the lack of emotions. But this Fic is one of the best that I ever read. That small erotic scene with the kidnapper/Stalker was so hot, better that any of "Kiss my Hand.." Really sexy, an Uke Seto Kaiba is always so yumi.
Very good plot too.
PD: Now, I want to see a real JoeyXSeto Lemon ^_~ (You're the best).

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