rate_review Reviews

i hate reviewing, but this story is definitly worth it. absolutly stunning, theres no other word for it, please continue to write! *shakes head* bloody amazing...

Awwww *sniff* That was so sad! Poor lil' Ryou! *sniffle* But yet it was sweet but creepy @ the same time if that makes any sense! Very good fic! ^^

. . . Ah, that was so cool. You're writing style is very nice. I like when works are written in second person, although I'm not quite sure why. I just like things for no reason, as in the case with this story. It's so good! Poor Ryou, crying. Hmmm, it would be very pretty to see Ryou cry, though.
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Wtf am I on about? Oh yeah, the fact that this story is truly amazing. I hope you write others like it, okay? Yup, very well done. Kudos to you, my friend.

Oooooh! This is such a sweet? No wrong word...uh...oh hell it was sweet to me story! I love how we got to see what Bakura was thinking and how he never wanted to hurt Ryou-but yet he did (that's how I see Bakura). I think you captured Bakura and Ryou perfectly...just prefer to hear Ryou g cag called Ryou instead of 'little Bakura' ;p Great story, and love the phrases with the "because he cries" themes-very clever! Keep up the good work!

Excellent story! So deep and emotional, i totally loved it!
~Debs xxx