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Love and go with the rypu and bakura thing i love ryou and bakura....... pretty ryou *sighs dreamily*

Make ryou the seme. yeah he would be so cute as the seme and bak bakura a ring on the top of his ear.


Yessssssss make ryou the seme

wow...cute..i have always said i get hot when they fight...yes more!! begs cutely

h, be happy, this is the first aff.net fic I've ever reviewed and i've been reading them for a while. I decided to write one cause A) This WAS good and very original idea and B) You mentioned ff.net. Well, I put my yaoi fics (VERY disturbing/funny/twisted ones they are) on there and ignor the no NC-17 things. Stupid ff.net can kiss ma butt. LoL I say post it and if they take it down then either put it back or just stay here. Either way more people get to read youeat eat story!

EEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! AWESOME!!!!!!! ^___________^ I sooooooooooooooo can't wait for the Yuugi+Yami one and the Ryou+Bakura one!!! WEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! ^_____________________________^ Awesome lemon by the way!!!! Continue soon!!!!! ^___________^ ja!

Sun: OH! OH! PEIRCE BAKURAS NOSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE?!

Fire: YA! HE'D LOOK COOL WITH A NOSE-RING!

EarOOOOOOOOOOH! I JUST LOOOOOOOOVE HOT GUYS WITH NOSE-RINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yami: ( pops out of no where ) DIE EVIL VALLEY GIRL!!!!!!!!

Water:....uh....ya........they had a lot of sugar this mourning.

Sun: SUGAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Water:....uh......any way, Please!? peirce bakuras nose!!!!!!!

Fire: i'll give you a cookie if you do!!!!!!!

sun: COOKIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Baby: ........uh........bye bye!

I got an idea for Bakura's perising, try the top of his ear, Ryou should have fun playing with that^_^ Love the story

o.O *drools* Mmmm... Lemon..... That was very well written. I mean... very, very well. *nods* Joey is such a cutie.... *listens to Insationable* That is the perfect yaoi love-makin song. ^_^

Guess I'm in a heavy Kaiba/Joey mood tonight. *has recieved a Kaiba/Joey doujinshi* XD Wasn't too lemony... but was cute non the less. *nod nod*

Anyway, yeKeepKeep it up. This is good. *wants more K/J* ^_____^ And thanks for mentioning me! Oh, and if you're interested, I've got an account on FF.net. I write mostly Weiss Kreuz fics right now. *is a hardcore Yohji/Ken fan* So, shameless plugl, I know... but oh well. ^_^;;

Yeah. Loved your fic.

~UP

daisy: now _that_, was good!
nuva: lemony goodness!
daisy: who cares if this gets kicked off ff.net, please always continue it here!
nuva: yum yumminess! gotta love seto/jou-ness! ^-^ thanks for the yummy lemon! woohoo!
daisy: aw, ryou with a bellybutton piercing? that sounds cute!

Yay! That was really good for your first lemon! You should be proud! I do so love Jou/Seto, and I can't wait to see Bakura and Ryou's piercings (yum belly button ring!) Very creative, good job!
~Karre (aka Kame-sama)