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for Hovering At the Edge of Oblivion

by DracOnyx

person YugiPharaoh313
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm crying my eyes out!!! Your fanfiction is so well written. So much depth and detail. I absolutely love the way you write, the way you can make the reader feel the emotions as if they were the readers' own. Keep up the excellent work! I want to read more!!!!!!
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good I really lihe ehe ending please if it's possible can u make a sequel like when Yami's gets his body or something for like I just said very good
person Silvershadowfire
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great writing as usual. Loved the lemon, and the aftermath. Not much more to say than that...except that I wait with bated breath for Gravitation 2. (Not that I'm pushing or anything.:)
person LadyGrey
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww.... such a cute story. I like the way it turned out. And I'm so happy that you're giving us back "Going On"!! I've been meaning to tell you this for a while now, but there's a song on the radio that always gets me thinking about GI/GO... "Here Without You" -- I forget the group, but it goes "I'm here without you baby / But you're still on my lonely mind / I think about you baby / And I dream about you all the time..." I was even going to ask to write a little songfic about it but I haven't had any time lately. Maybe you can use it. Okay, time to sleep, ja ne!
person Sansi
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's really fitting. I thought it was a good idea too continue. Though I think it would be too much like in the anime.
Wonderful story
person Deb
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!!
Aww Yugi and Yami are so cute together!
I loved this so much!
Great job huni!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person Terra
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful ending. It left everything wide open for a sequel too. (hint, hint) And it was such a well done story everything flowed so good. I love seeing a kind, sane Malik.

Can't wait for the rewrite of Going On.
person Arainaina
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was very good glade Yugi and Yami got together.
person Sansi
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You think that was bad? You couldn't be more wrong! I loved it!
person Terra
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a very touching chapter. so simply put, if they had only talked to each other.

Update soon.

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