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by Safire1

person Cvara
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yessssssssssssss! I like... no LUV this fic! You better make a sequel! ^_~ Plz I beg you! This is so sexy!! These two are my fave pair too! Maybe the next one can be... NC-17? lol. anyway, PLZ make a sequel! I rate this with 5 starz! *****

CC
person Minako
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please do a sequeal! I love you! This fic was great. i wanna know what happens next pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease
person mina
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::Giggles::: Does it count if I give 25 reviews? PLEASE! I luved the fic! Need BXM! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...
person Nancy
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. Do a sequel please!!! poor Ryou I wonder why he's always getting abused? ^_-
person ForgottenHope
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Chuckles Manicaly* sequel? yes please, and Bakura should get a turn at being on top. I kind of feel sorry for Ryou, but its Malik/Bakura, so who gives a damn about the cream puff?

Jai ne

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person Kamui
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O__________________________________________O


Wow. All I can say, love, is Wow. (( Don't mind the nickname, I seem to do that a lot )) I loved this! Most people think that Marik-chan and Bakura-kun would never do this kind of thing, but oh my gosh.

This was a lovely fic! I read it all in... Twenty minutes? Then again. XD *Snickers*

Thanks for making my day better! It means a lot!

Love always,

Kamui

P.S- E-mail me, okay? I have got to get to know you. O_o If you're not scared of psycho people... Like me... *Grinz*
person Neko
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry if that's a little demanding but I love where this story is going. I'm a Ryou and I love storys where he's in alot of pain, so your story is now one of my favorates. It has a good story line and I would love to see an ending to this little sex fight that the tomb-robber and the tomb-keeper are having. I hope you get more reviews and will write another chapter. Thank yor tor taking the time to read this, happy writing.

From,
Neko-chan
person Prince Chameleon
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do the sequel, Saffir1-sama! Please? I'd love to read it where Bakura gets revenge... The story is excellent, although the POV titles were... Big.
person reis_tigeress
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, very original and so, so kinky, I LOVE IT, you have got to write more cos this is one of the best things i have ever read, keep up the good work.
person Horizont
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

That's a beautiful BDSM! ^_^x *gh* Bakura's masochistic part is describes very convincingly, I liked that! Let him be seme next time, kay? ^.~x Ryo Ryou's great at seeing the advantages: He's badly injured - true - but at least he's getting away from tea, that should be worth it (Yami never gets that hurt, that's why she's still after him... >_I'd love to read a sequal, although it would be read more fluently if you'd keep to one perspective (an all-knowing narrator comes in handy) and not change it all few sentences. That's all I have o critisize!
Great job!

Horizont

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