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oh goooooodness this is good. there really aren't enough seme ryou stories. and this one is written so well. i love how much ryou and bakura love each other even if they are fucking kaiba. :D and that ryou is so talented. whew...good. stuff.

OMG!!!!! *hastily wipes away nosebleed* That was HOT! I bow before you. Please take my soul to the place that you get these lemony thoughts!

Wow, that was good. Did you say that was your first lemon? Impressive... mine was kinda... lame. ^^ very nice. Uke Seto... YAY!!!

It seems to me that, in the entire collection of stories that fill the YGO sections, there's very few that I can enjoy. Fne rne reason or another. Your Steam fic led me to this one, as the...indulgence left over from your writing left me rather.....
Inspired. Anyhow, I can understand how reviews really bost confidence level, and I hope this one encourages you to persure the secksiness that is smutty fandom!

Initially, I believed the "pairing" of this fanfic to be extremely obscure, yet it was compiled beautifully. This is by far one of the most skillfully written fanfic I have read on adultfanfon.non.net (REJOICE, FOR I NOTED NO BASIC GRAMMAR MISTAKES! On this site, this is a cause for celebration. XD) This work is wonderfully addicting to the reader and planned superbly. My only trouble was the use of simple words such as, "ass;" within the flowery style of your writing, those words slightly distract. Aside from that, this fic has a magnificent quality far surpassing most others.

Oh. Um... Wow. Very, very wonderful lemon. No, wonderful STORY. I know it PWP, but man...it was terrific.

That was definitely one of the best lemons I have ever read! It was not only incredibly sexy, but also very beautifully written. I loved the way you depicted Ryou as the seme, submissively even due to the fact that he was on top. Great job! I hope you will write more! ^_^