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by BishojoShadow

person don wanna say
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very powerful and captivating story keep it up! I like the Ryou and Seto pairing...Funny how you made Yami have such a big mouth. He's telling every other person about what happened.
person shakster
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why people don't like your story. I think it's pretty good, perhaps that's just one girl's opinion, but hey, hater's will hate I suppose. : )
person MB
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think it's terrible what has hapennend on ff.net with the story. It's deleted, isn't it? I was furious when I yesterday read your "bashing". How can a sane person be such a fool? I really don't understand the rantings at all. When Ryous or Yugis Father ven ven Yugis Grnadpa is abusive (like in many other stories) They don't give a fuck, but if it is Seto they start to seem to own him. It's a shame that there are so much dorky reviewers aka flamers. But to the story: I think your idea with Seto kidnapping Ryou and all is very interesting. It shows very much the rights which rich people think they have just becausey hey have r inr influences on other's. But it's sooooo sad, these things always happen to poor Ryou .. *sniff*
I hope Bakura and Marik take their chance and fabricate Seto to little, ugly, bloody pieces after torturing him endlessly to show at least a little bit of how much pain Ryou and Yugi had to endure. *sniff* RYOUUUUU !!! Please be save soon. >.<

Great story!
MB
person ajf
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ya know I lurves it so I'm gonna review every chappie so ya don't lose any reviews, at least from me! ^_^
person ajf
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!!! Here I am again, faithful reviewer girl, here to fulfil the needs of one displaced story!!! ^_^ Ppl, read it and you'll like it!
person ajf
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, back at the reviewing again! UM, only 4 chappies to go, and I'll be up to date. ^_^
person ajf
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanx to Aff.net for making a place for writers who want to express themselves openly! Read this story, tis good. ^_^
person ajf
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still reviewing, still loving it, can't wait to read all the new stuff!! ^_^
person ajf
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chappie was very sad! Now I'm finally up to the newest chappies which I haven't read. On with the reading. ^_^
person ajf
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Allright!! Now Seto's got three yami's on his ass! Let's w him him get out of this one alive!! ^_^

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