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for Coalescence

by TheCzarina

person Blue September
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your chapters make me so happy. I love the way you can make the story and the relationship so illiilling without having throw a sex scene into every chapter. (Not that I mind that. It's just nice to have something different.) It's great and I can't get enough! 'Til next time... Tata!
person Anon
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Coalescence is a great story. I cant wait for the next Chapter!
person lupusdragon
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Awwww... another sweet chapter. I just love this version of Seto.
LD: And we are getting closer to the mystery of the cards!
Karen: Yay! I just love it. I can hardly believe that Seto asked permission to hold Yami's hand. It is so great, I almost cried.
LD: Oh, please update again soon. This is so exciting!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: EEWWW...mushy!
DD: Oh come off it Dragon! It was sweet!
YD: But I wanna lemon!
DD: Oh for Ra's sake yami! It can't all be about the lemons!
YD: Can too!
DD: Can not!
YD: CAN TOO!!
DD: Whatever...anyways, good chapter!!
person Anubus
schedule April 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is getting more interesting by the chapter, good work!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was GREAT! So, Seto thinks Yugi's kinda cute huh? This could get interesting! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
schedule April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Hunh, I've always heard the expression with wooden nickels, but I guess it works either w. no. not really important. Have I mentioned lately how much I just love Yugi?
LD: Far to often for my tastes... but anyway, yeah, this is getting really really good. I think we say that every chapter, hunh?
Karen: But it keeps being true. I mean so much keeps going on and even here in chapter 11 there is more development and all sorts of twists! It is awesome.
LD: Uh-hunh! Yippie! More, more, more! Please, please, please!
person Yummi Yami
schedule April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yayness!! ^___^ OMG, I absolutely adore this story!! Aww...poor Yugi's jealous... Is this going to be a S/Y/Y eventually? Anyway, please write more ASAP!!!!!!!
person Aymeleh
schedule April 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Can you continue soon??
person Dragoameramer Yami Dragon
schedule April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is getting SOOO good! Poor Seto! And what's going on with Yugi? I can't wait until the next chapter! Please PLEASE update soon!!!

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