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for Coalescence

by TheCzarina

person Yummi Yami
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW!! This chapter was soooooo sweet!!! Y/Y numminess! ^_^ Tis good!! *nod, nod* Tis VERY good!! Beautifully written!! Please write more soon!!
person Pikazoom
schedule May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, yes, people mistake it for 5000 years because the dubbers messed up on that. A millenium is only 3000 years, I think...

About the age thing...the official Japanese Yu-gi-oh guide never really confirmed ages. Seto's b-day is Oct 25. and Yugi's is June 4. Some say Seto is 16 (making him younger than Yugi) and others say he's 17 (making him older). Did I confuse you more? Sorry -_-
schedule May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LD: Grr, evil cliffie * chases cliffhanger with laptop *
Karen: * Starts thowing imported YGO dvds at cliffhanger *
LD: * hits cliffhanger with laptop * Haha! See, it is a much better chapter without the cliffhanger.
Cliffhanger: x_x
Karen: That is so sweet! Seto and Yuugi, yippie!
LD: Oh, and we are getting closer to lemony goodness! Please, pretty, pretty please!
Karen: Great chappie. Update again soon!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Oh yeah!! Threesome!
DD: Get off it yami...they're having a heart to heart here and all you can think about is sex?!
YD: Well, yeah.
DD: *rolls eyes* I think this is really sweet. Seto really has changed from the beginning of the story.
YD: Mmmm...I guess
DD: Ignore her, she been writing too many lemons. Please keep up the great work. I'm really enjoying this story.
person lupusdragon
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: * gasp *
LD: wow. that was intense.
Karen: So Yami and Yugi must become one so Yami can have his own body... this is very complicated.
LD: Why is it that people who are supposed to be wise are always so cryptic. It is annoying.
Karen: I think it is that they are not as wise as they'd like others to believe.
LD: * snickers * Maybe. I can't wait, I can't wait for the next update!
Karen: -_- You are so poetical.
person Chibi-chan
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Please dont say Yami and Yugi are gonna have sex -- I just don't like picturing that. ^^;;;;;; Though, it's prolly gonna happen sooner or later. x_x Uke!Seto...Yum, yum, yum. heehee, this is getting better and better with each chapter! I can't wait to read more of your wonderfully written stories!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: OKay...now Seto's getting desperate
DD: Eeewww...
YD: Well, the boy needs to get laid
DD: True.
YD: Can't wait for the next chapter
DD too too!
person Chibi-chan
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yea! ^^;; Can you please make uke!Seto? ^^ Seto being topped is so damned sexy. :D~
person elegance
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well done! The interaction between Set/Yami/Yugi was really touching; and this was the first time I had seen the Dark Magician evolve into a character with a small, yet important, part in the story. Please finish this fic!
person Chibi-chan
schedule May 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
@_@ Argh...Continue! ^^

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