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for Glaring Dream

by YamiYugiGal

person Anubus
schedule April 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Irisa is one determined young lady, not about to take jac*t f*t from absoluetly no one. I like her, she's very headstrong, independent, and confident. Please update soon and keep me guessing!
Later
-Anubus
person Yasumi
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic alot. And if you have not found anyone to write your lemons you can read my story called Kibo and decided if you like the way I write lemons and I'll write them for you.

E-mail me at: Yasumi_chan@hotmail.com
person animekid
schedule April 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heheh, gomen, but I can't help you on the lemon part hav have trouble writing them myself!) But I like the story!
person Big_Daddy
schedule April 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read this and didn't know what the hell was going on but hey... 2 thumbs and a stinky toe up!!!!

keep on writing dammit!!!
person Big_Daddy
schedule April 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Demon, if you are so insistent on spelling right then grammer should be spelled grammar fool! and the name of the girl is Irisa!!! Hey Yami_Yugi_Gal very very nice writing though...Smiley Smile!!!
person alli
schedule March 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
If I already put in a review for this story I DON'T CARE! It is so awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please do another chapter, PLEASE?
person DemonDarknessWanderer
schedule March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good, but there were lots of errors in the way of grammer and spelling. it was a little choppy, but otherwise well written. Will Yami *and* Seto "marry" the girl? Is it Irisea? update it soon plez.

~*~DDW~*~
person Anubus
schedule March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yet again, another perfect chapter.... Not to say, My name was in it. I am quite flattered. Please finish soon.
person Anubus
schedule March 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I am looking foreward to this story. I love the way you've explained the setting.... Not many people do that.
person DracoStarbo
schedule March 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O, pretty fic! Pretty fic! lol. It was really good. I think I can see where this is going with Irisa and the Pharoh. Heh-heh. *wink, wink* Anyhow . . . I would help you, but I'm kinda swamped with other fics of mine and we're already doing an rp fic of our own, so no can do. Gomen nasi.

Laugh and Smile!
-Starbo

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