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for Glaring Dream

by YamiYugiGal

person Akina Tori
schedule March 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Akina Tori: The grammer people speak...OVERLOADS MEH HEAD!
Kyukyo: Will duh.. Your a dumb ass!
Akina Tori: Your the dumb dumb ass.
Kyukyo: Takes one to know one!
*faint fighting and yelling in the background*
Hikari: Um... ignore the two.. Just keep it up, and um... Keep writing!JA NE!
*poof*
person Videl Writhey
schedule March 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I will help you finish. I have nothing be to to do. if you have neopets, i am videlson1. plese e-mail.
person Ykarzel
schedule March 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, and the original character is not tacky like most are. Love the characterization. I love your style! It's original. This story is a nice twist on they ancient egypt plot.
person bengemina87
schedule March 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEY HEY friend) this was good needs new chaptures!
and the fact that seth and yami are bf/bf...well its odd...but its acseptable LOL
person broli
schedule March 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pretty kewl...typical 'heroess'..she asspiars to do good..yet..because of her.."background" she falls short...no one can really like her when her true self comes out...da witch...but she stills wants ta help..and does it kowing they will try to turn her in or somthing :)
person broli
schedule March 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is quite good, I liked it alot..I hope to see chapter three SOON! DONT KEEP ME WAITING!! :P
Where where o where is chpter three?
Bah! Stop it..she hasnt done it yet..just wait.
Dont hit me
What ever..just wait
person reaper_of_sorrows03
schedule March 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great fic! i love it, and i can't wait to see more!
person reaper_of_sorrows03
schedule March 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very nice, i'm really like irisa ^^ hope to see more yami/seto interactions...
person bakurasgirl
schedule March 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the premise to this story. I know I wouldn't mind being between Seto and Yami. *drools and drools and drool*
person Chibi
schedule March 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
add more please!!! gah, this is good, and i can't wait 2 see what Yami and Seth will do. Irisa rocks ^_^

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