rate_review Reviews

Very nice indeed. I love the intellectual aspect here. The yaoi is great too, of course. That's why I read AFF.net, but there is real substance here. I'm impressed.

And now I'm off to read the follow up fic. Thanks for that by the way. This piece deserves a good continuation.

You're one of the best authors I've seen on this site to date! Now I'm even more flattered by that review you left me for my fic "Frozen Flame". #^_^# Praise always means more when it comes from the people you admire. Consider me one of your #1 fans!
And I'm very glad that you have chosen to continue this. Now if you'll excuse me, I must feast my eyes on the companion fic to this one...mmmm...

Wow, this was great, I mean, really great. Very in-character and thought provoking. Self-doubt/Uke Kaiba is always great, and I think it's alot more realistic than the arrogant seme everyone seems to characterize him as (even myself at times, I have to admit...d Jod Jou's fears of not wanting to become like his father...really hit home. Great lemon too...that always helps.^^ I look forward to the companion fic.

ooh ooh! Me! i want more! ::pouts::
Please make a sep ficcy, i loved this one and i'm sure i'll love it, too^^
*hums lil' Mermaid song while thinking about the lovely concept of a S/J that is original actually doesn't suck* ::sighs::

Write more! Leaving this incomplete would be very disheartening.

*hums more Little Mermaid songs, to inspire you*

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue because if you don't i will never stop bugging you, i have no life i can do it. This was such a good story but i want to know if Joey and Seto get together. So PLEASE finish the story and right more. By the way loved the Marik seane best i have seen yet. Keep going.

I like it. And your right about it leaving you wanting more. If you ever decide to write the sequal please e-mail me a link, would you. You might have to remind me who you are i have a terable memory. ><; But this fic is very good, well constructed and had no gramatical or spelling mistakes i could find. Which is very rare on this site. It also has well writen angest (i cant spell. so dont blame me) that is believable, and unbelievably well writen. With a empting splash of BDSM. ^.^ And i can see how you could get this fic out of that line... Well i hope you make another fic. This one seemed like the begining of a saga and leaves you wanting more.

Keep up the good work. heyy

please please please please please write the seperate fic!!!!!!!!!! and a malik/seto too!!! malik deserves his prist goddamnit!

All I can say is wow. That was truly an awesome fic. Wonderfully written. Very tragic, very bifuliful. If you end it here youre absolutly EVIL :o lol. All those little references back to Jou, and his feelings, youve got to run with that. PLEASE update this.

*raises hand*