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Me: *sobs* not yet?
Yami: come on! We want to see what happens!!!
Me: do we need to make at least one hundred reviews? We caknowknow
Yami: yea, listen to her, cause we can, right koi?
Me: yup! HURRY PLEASE!!!
Yami: busy with your other story that has five hundred reviews, but this one is also nice!!!
Me: Yami, "nice?" IT'S COOL AND AWESOME!!!
Yami: outta here *leaves room*
Me: *smiles* *puppy dog looks* please? CAN U CONTINUE 2 UPDATE? I WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT WITH YUGI/SETO!!! HURRY!!! *follows Yami*

Me: hmm? Not yet.
Yami: *smiles* i think i send her to the shadow rhelm already.
Me: YOU DID WHAT!?
Yami: *wide eyed* i thought u wanted that aibou!!!
Me: yea, but not for real though!
Yami: *groans* it might not be possible for her to get back.
Me: why?
Yami: cause the shadow rhelm doesn't allow anybody free unless u want 2
Me: Yami! i want 2!!! we do have a millennium item, didn't u forget that your a spirit?
Yami: *sweatdropped* been hanging outside 2 long with your friends i guess.
Me; *shrugs* excuses.
Yami: your review aibou?
Me: oh! PLEASE CONTINUE AND IF YOUR IN THE SHADOW RHELM, I'M TERRIBLY SORRY AND MY YAMI WILL GET U BACK SOMEHOW.
Yami: i will? but i want her there!!!
Me: Yami do what i say or i will send our item back to egypt.
Yami: *sighed* i'll do it tonight when she's sleeping in the shadow rhelm. *smrik*

i know u r busy with the other story that has over 500 reviews or so, but when r u going to update this story? I WANT TO SEE A FOURSOME!!!

ah, sorry about my other review. kind of press enter and ah, youw whw what it did. I REALLY, REALLY WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!!! *sobs*
Yami: what's wrong aibou?
Me: the author won't update this story. its been four months!
Yami: if the author doesn't, can i send the author to the shadow rhelm?
Me: of course Yami.
Yami: yay, watch out, if your birthday is almost here, you'll be gone forever!!!
Me: Yami, not like that.
Yami: *sweatdropped* but that's what the shadow rhelm does, let people disappear forever!!!
Me: very well. PLEASE CONTINUE IF U WANT TO SURVIVE BY MY YAMI!!!

*Poke poke* You need to update! I very much like this story and I'm waiting for an update! *poke poke* So update! :P

~~~Cherry~~~

This fic is SOOO good! I was never into big groupie lovin... but the way you wrote this out was amazing! I was completely enthralled by this fic. And I love MG as well, but you have to update this one! I need to see how this all turns out. Of course it's going to work out fine.. it has to! but.. I need to read the process that occurs before it gets happy.. pleeeease? Anyways.. I rate your writing and your fics A++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ =)

man, now i know why all the reviewers were telling you to update this fic. It is good! I like it lots!! Hmmm a foursome would be great! I know your having fun with Millenium Gold right now, so have fun!!!

Lady Elfskye

Yuji: I think Seto and Yami got just what they deserved!!!
Yumi: How so?
Yuji: They're cheats!!
Yumi: Um what about the Yuji/Joey thing?
Yuji: At least the had the respect to not do it when they had Yami and Seto!!
Yumi: I think they're planing a foursome
Yuji: Um a foursome? I don't like those I don't like threesomes either I like good old one on one
Yumi: Why did that sound so wrong?
Yuji: Bour our head is sick?
Yumi: Whatever, Hikari
Yuji: Update!!

Whoo! Intense fic! I LOVE IT! I can't wait until you update! Poor Seto, he's going through hell and back. Damn. Even Mokuba told him off. Jou-kun better not try to start another fight... unless it ends up with them making out... then it's okay!^^

RD:hey Red Dragon here good story thought Yami should be feeling ashamed of himself i mean ok Seto does have a few bits to him that are goods assests to a lover and obviously he is like a dragon and i like dragons but would u actually risk having this stupid affair i guess with seto at the risk of hurting Yugi i mean u KNOW how accepting yugi is u KNOW he would have given u over to seto if u wanted that and hell he probably would have joined u im sure seto wouldnt mind having a go with Yugi if u wanted him to same goes for Jonouchi he is a good guy to love and i know he would have loved the chance to relove him again i guess hoy all im trying to say is a very common bit of advice ALWAYS THINK BEFORE U DO ASK YOURSELF WOULD YUGI REALLY HATE U IF U TOLD HIM RATHER THEN HIM FINDING OUT IN VERY COMPRAMISING WAY hoy well anywas aurthor pls pls pls pls plspls pls pls pls pls pls pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeePLEASE FINISH THIS STORY FOR THOUGHTEALYEALY REALY LILKE REREADING THIS STROTY I WOULD VERY MUCH APPRICIATE U WRITING MORE ILL GRANT U ANYTHING AN AUTHOR COULD WANT CUZ IM A DRAGON OF INFABNIBLE POWER WHO CAN GRANT U WHAT EVER U WISH SO PLS PLS PLS WRITE AND FINISH THIS STORY thnk u bye the way like i said good story and pls fix this situation with yami yugi and joey and seto maybe a foursome wouldnt be to bad if they really want it well JA and remember WRITE MORE CHAPTERS AND FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE