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for Baby of Mine

by Aten

person Elys
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
make steven guilty please.
person Elys
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
steven guilty.
person Elys
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
steven guilty. chibis cute!!!!!
person Elys
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
alright so this time i achuly counted my reviews and this is the seventh review. makeven ven guilty.
person Elys
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
8th review. steven guilty
person Elys
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
10th review. I hope this helps with the vertik or how ever you spell it. steven is guilty. how yeah i love you and your story!!!!!!! ^_^ kill anzu and steven is guilty . this is my last reviev for now (cackles evilly)
person PharaohYamisPrincess (don
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think that Steven should be guilty. The idea of the restraining order sounds good but I hate Steven so much I t I think he should be guilty. Ryou shouldn't have to put up with Steven again. The stupid bastard he is. Aten and Aria get cuter in each chappie. I want them for myself!
person Danae2120
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww...Aten is just so cute and fluffy and I wish I could hug him. And Aria is adorable too. Hee. "Who's got daddy's bloodlust?"

Hum...Steven being innocent would make a lot of conflict in the story can can't decide. Do as you please. ^^
person BuffyM
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the story,having his innocent would be cooler to see.Yay,seto and cotton candy!*drools*
liked the previous chapter too along with the others sorry i didn't review i was buzy but i loved it too.I love that it's a long story i love long stories!Have Bakura make Ryou wear some hot
tight leather,
Ryou:*blushes*Do I have to wear this?
Bakura:Yeah!I promise I'll dot yot you want next time.
Ryou::smirks:Anything?hmm...
lol cause I've never heard Ryou wearing hot tight leather...mm i mean having yami and seto in leather was so..mmm...lol Say bye yami!
Yami and Yami Spike:Bye yami!
person gralnak
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Anzu...................
heehee..........
Allmost done with ch10 of Undying Light
:)GRALNAK

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