rate_review Reviews

well, i tried but i just couldn't see this as anything but wierd. sorry, i can usualy get into the guy on guy action but not this time. maybe it was because i couldn'tugi get the image of tall, fully grown kiba with short-stuff, small-fry, little yugi. it just seemed so wrong.....so, really i couldn't get interested; but not for lack of trying. well, better luck next time.
~courtney

I was really surprised! Thios is one of the best one-shots i've ever read!
I don't think they're ooc.
I like your style. Go on like this!
Greetings from Austria!

i really loved this story... Kaiba and Yugi..... not a bad pairing, but i think that i like Yami and Yugi, with Kaiba and Joey.... Yea. but yours is real good 2!!!! u should write another one....... pretty good.Me like..... yes, me like. Do write another one..... pease?

hn.... I'm just gonna go play cards with seto now....

Ouch now that what I call playing cards...lol, oh my so what is going to happen now? maybe something more?.

That's a real cool PWP, I liked it a lot, especially since there aren't all that many (good) PWPs out there--- *sigh* And happen to be searching for Seto/Yugi thigies right now anyway so... perfct timing! Guess you won your bet... ^^x My friend also says that I wouldn't be able to write a lemon... I'm not sure if she's right though- ^^;; I haven't really tried it. Oh well, I'd have to write it in German which doesn't sound as nice...

Okay, great work!
Write another one...? ^_^x

~Horizont

:bloody nose: Wow, you sure prooved your friend off! Great one shot! It may be a little O.O.C but who's story isn't?^^