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for Escape

by modnar

person Rikun
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"I am the hamburglar!" Awesome! line is Awesome.
I enjoyed it. It was fun, and no one was particularly out of character.
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow so random review here but i decided to start at the end and work my way forward and I stumbled across your story. I must say I love it! It had me giggling like a school girl...or a five year old on speed...any way LOVED IT!
person Mazu
schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
two simple words: Love (and) Update
person HJ11
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story alot! and no i don't think ur lemons sucked. I hope u write more stories soon^_^
person Felidae
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, from hot, sweaty sex to roaring laughter within three point eight seconds-'My favourite was yellinur our own name!'
I laughed so hard, I'm sure, myghboghbours all think I'm a complete nutso. I love this story, there are too little fun/smut stories out there. Usually they're dark, angsty, depressing, violent, ect. Nice to see, that somebody still remembers the importance of laughter-and good smut, of course..! :D
person Rupi
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mm.... yummy... Keep up the good work!
person Triste
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:;laughs:: Oh, this was great! Very sexy, very funny and very sweet...I loved it! ^__^
person Shorty*
schedule April 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... I loved Jou's randomness in the bed. The conversation, but especially the lunatic face... jeez, I'm still laughing at that, just thinking about it. XD Ah, lovely story, written well too. ^-^
schedule April 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jou's on top, Jou's on top! [snickers] Seme!Jou. ^_^ Forgive the randomness of this review, it's late where I live. Yeah, Seto's a bit ooc, but this is such a delightful lemon that it's more than forgiveable. This closure is a bit wobbly, this *could* stand as a one-shot, but there's plenty of room for more chapters. My sstiostion? Add more chapters. ~_^
person Super Hentai
schedule April 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*snorts* I am a Hamburglar? *cackles*

And the lemon was hott. Nummy.

And Mokuba and Yami betting? Heh... Mokuba beat the King of Games. ^______^

And Jounouchi's dad being nice was a good change. ^^

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