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for Stronger Than Before

by Mellybean

person bakurasgirl
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehehe....GO YUGI! Sex crazed light.............mmmmm.....sex crazed light......OO.....EVEN BETTER.....sex crazed yami! Lexi is so cute, i want to hug her and squeeze her and squish her until she can't breathe anymore! Justin is so cute, too! Poor Tristan and Joey......so cute...*hugs Joey and Tristan* OMG! I HUGGED TRISTAN!!!!!
person Tik
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, Tik like . . . Tik like v. much . . . nice bit w. Keith . . . yup, Tristan IS getting possesive . . .
person KC
schedule November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: yea, you've finally updated!!!
Yami: when is she going to decide to go and put up a Seto/Yami/Yugi story when they were married or something?
Me: good point koi, i don't know yet
Yami: *shrugs* probably she doesn't want to
Me: hey, it was just a suggestion koi!!!
Yami: perhaps, but still...
Me: humph *leaves room*
Yami: *looks at computer screen* OH NO I'M NOT DOING THE REVIEW KOI!!! I HATE DOING THIS DAMN REVIEWS, COME BACK HERE!!! *Groans* damn, i hate it when she doesn't listen 2 me. Anywayz, please continue ok? Can't wait for the next chappie!!! Don't wait 2 long!!! *runs after me*


CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! *PUPPY DOG LOOKS*
person gralnak
schedule November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
aHHH!nooooo!

well...he is a doctor.....or is he....

:|gralnak
person bakurasgirl
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OO....BAD WIFE! BAD! Teasing Joey like that with the drugs....BAD, BAD, BAD, BAD, BAD DRAGON!

mmmmmmmmmm..........Bad dragon.......*thinks hentai thoughts*

In any case, GO BAKURA! he's too sexy for his canines, baby! I can just imagine Seto naked sleeping with Yugi and Yami. There's a scene I'd like to wake up to. Anyways....Can I squish Lexi until she stops breathing? I think she is really asking for a squishing in the worst way.

If not, it's ok...I can squish Aten...*cradles Aten plushie*

Anyways, since you are waiting to read your reviews, I'm gonna get off the computer now. I love you, my Yami Dragon!
person KC
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: *cheers* go, JOEY AND TRISTAN!!!
Yami: why r u cheering for those loosers?
Me: LOOSERS?! THEY WERE MAKING HOT LO! *! *laughs*
Yami: *blushes* i knew that...
Me: i thought u were reading the chapter in the other computer koi
Yami: *sneers* did it ever occur to u that there weren't any computers 5000 years ago?
Me: *wide-eyed* u mean, u were just starring at a blank screen?
Yami: damn right!!! Don't know how to turn on a computer so i just bang and tried to hit it
Me: U DID WHAT?! THAT'S MY BROTHER'S COMPUTER U BAKA!!!
Yami: ah, oops?
ME: OOPS?! I'M GOING TO BE DAMN TROUBLE WHEN MY BROTHER GETS BACK THIS WEEKEND FROM THE DORM!!! YOUR SO GOING TO PAY FOR THIS YAMI!!!
Yami: ha, ha... *leaves room quickly*
Me: YAMI!!! DON'T U DARE RUN AWAY FROM ME!!! I KNOW WHERE U LIVE!!! U SHARE THE SAME BED WITH ME U KNOW!!! *Sighed* later, i'll give her a pep talk and tell mom and my brother what happened. *sighed* PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! CAN'T WAIT 2 SEE IF JOEY IS GOING TO GO AND DO IT OR NOT!!! PLUS, MORE WITH SETO/YAMI/YUGI OF MAKING LOVE!!! *Smirk* LAST TIME WE ALL SAW THREE OF THEM MAKING LOVE WAS IN CHAPTER 1 I THINK. SO, PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! OR WAS IT LIKE CHAPTER 8 THEY WERE MAKING LOVE, BUT PUT THE 3 OF THEM BACK!!! CONTINUE!!! *RUNS AFTER YAMI*
person Amber
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*wails* No! Joey! DON'T DO IT!!!! *falls out of chair* Owwww....
I hate cliffies
But I luff this story
person Tik
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! COOL CLIFFE!!! What's Joey going to do . . . da dum (dramatic chord)?
person Lady Elfskye
schedule November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WTF!! @_@ NO WAY!! It's a test. Come on, Joey, don't do this.... I hate you

Wonderful chappie!! Heh, Oh, I love an evil 'K!! H!! He so mean!! *snuggles Bakura, then gives him back to bakurasgirl* *Snuggles Lexi* she is so cute!!!!! I cannot wait for the weekend!! UPDATE NOW!!! LOL!

Lady Elfskye
person zatken
schedule November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Come on, Bakura - kill the bitch from hell! How dare she stops Tristan and Joey from adopting Lexi. I hope between Kaiba and Bakura, they'll give that bitch her just drts!rts!

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