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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
mmm, so hot! ^_^ yami and yugi forever! I just love those guys! great story btw, I love to read about when they first confess their love for eatch other(...and their first time doing `it´)!
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was too sweet and very hot. The fact that you did not overdo the sex scene made it even better. I like how you used 'baby'. I've always thought that it is sweet when the older, more dominant character calls the younger that, like a child 'baby baby baby' *sigh* kawaii!!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah that was cute, and very very sugary sweet!
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Total sweetness and whatnot; I loved it. You should continue on it, you really really should!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aiyaiyai... it's so cute and for some reason Yami seems a little tinge out of character ^_^;;, but don't care ^_^.
It's cool and good job :) .
It's cool and good job :) .
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't read this story enough! You are one awesome writer! Keep writing!
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohh, what a verry, verry cute story!! ^-^
It was soo so sweet... And how both of them behaved the whole story... I think, they are totaly in character!
I enjoyed it verry much!!
And sometimes it was also a little bit funny too! I'm in love with this sentence: "Yami sat on a nearby beach chair. He pulled out sunglasses and leaned back, his arms behind his head." Sunglases!! *lool* Very witty!! I think, they fits to him!! ^____^
I hope you will write more of this soo cute stories!! Your stile fits to the story and the characterdesign!
And Yami x Yugi is my favorite couple!! ^___^
Greetz
Polarstern ^^
(Sorry if there are some mistakes... but I'm German XD""")
It was soo so sweet... And how both of them behaved the whole story... I think, they are totaly in character!
I enjoyed it verry much!!
And sometimes it was also a little bit funny too! I'm in love with this sentence: "Yami sat on a nearby beach chair. He pulled out sunglasses and leaned back, his arms behind his head." Sunglases!! *lool* Very witty!! I think, they fits to him!! ^____^
I hope you will write more of this soo cute stories!! Your stile fits to the story and the characterdesign!
And Yami x Yugi is my favorite couple!! ^___^
Greetz
Polarstern ^^
(Sorry if there are some mistakes... but I'm German XD""")
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story has been plagarised. Check the YGO board for 'hot sun'
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gods and goddesses forget yami you made me melt holy shit that was impressive. i throughly enjoyed that and yikes that was just amazing WOW i can't say it enough that i loved that i was so hot and incredibly arousing. please keep writing and update again soon.
thanx mizukimarr910
thanx mizukimarr910
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was TOTALLY BEAUTIFUL. I loved it entirely. You should write another like this. You are a good writer. Do you ,like YamixYugi? If you do, you should e-mail me. My e-mail address is joeygirl184@yahoo.com. Please e-mail me.