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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whau. well writen, very well done, (slight blush) whau you can feel the passion and the love in this, and i love yami/yugi pairings
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTA!
Good discriptions
Good discriptions
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like that the action was set during a storm...but I wonder what it would have been like to keep up the searing summer heat thing? I bet the story would have had a whole different feel to it. GOOD STORY! I've never read a lovey scene set during a storm before--it was twisted in a good way!
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really a nice one! You express the whole stuff so amazingly.... *clappshands*
It really is sweet, I hope to read more of your FF´s!!!
It really is sweet, I hope to read more of your FF´s!!!
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September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK, it's raining, I have a pool, and my boyfriend just came home. So all I have to say is thanks for the idea! ^_-
I loved the story- it's so sweet- and you're a great writer!
^_^
I loved the story- it's so sweet- and you're a great writer!
^_^
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...it was KAWAII! And hot and yummy too. Arigato for this nice chappy. Will there be more? I will read them if there is. So bring out something soon. You are really good. ^_^ Ja ne!
Y&Y4EVER
Y&Y4EVER
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May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...it was KAWAII! And hot and yummy too. Arigato for this nice chappy. Will there be more? I will read them if there is. So bring out something soon. You are really good. ^_^ Ja ne!
Y&Y4EVER
Y&Y4EVER
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehehe...yami
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww......how sweet....
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May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's nice, but... I kept thinking how they're going to get struck by lightning out by that pool! Love the rain imagary, but might be a good idea to drop the lightning. Being around water while it's lightning is really dangerous and I can't see Yami endangering his little Yugi like that! ^_^