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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. You know how to write passionet sex. Not too smutty but still smutty. I love the way that you write and I hope that you post the next chapter of the story soon.
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December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man I really liked that story! I hope that you update it soon! It was really well writen and stuff...
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome, i love the innocence you gave the girl. I like stories like these. There is a fine line between writing a passonate story and a ranchy one and you deffently know the difference.