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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That actually made me cry. It reminded me of how I feel when it comes to my girlfriend and I and my...habit. It's horrible. Bravo, very well-written. Heartbreaking but so honest.
PS: You're right- making a character bleed is loads better. Plus, you end up with a great story!
PS: You're right- making a character bleed is loads better. Plus, you end up with a great story!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh mt freakin' Ra!
that was so sad, and so well written...
normally i stop when i find out it's a jou-suicide-fic, but i just couldn't stop
i also read some of your other stories and i think you're a fantastic author!
that was so sad, and so well written...
normally i stop when i find out it's a jou-suicide-fic, but i just couldn't stop
i also read some of your other stories and i think you're a fantastic author!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaahhhh...well written but ...you made me cry...waaaahhhhh. Fix it...add a chapter where Seto stops him and gets him help...or they meet in heaven...waaaahhhh PLEASE...
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really intense!! Anyway, I really liked it, it's very well written. Great job!
I especially liked that you kept it realistic throughout the story (unless other stories where people die after making one small, tiny cut, which is really not possible...)
Also a great psychological first-person-view on self injuries and what Joey thinks about it. Poor Joey :.(
The way you describe Joey's and the others' characters is really convincing!
Keep up the good work! ^__^
I especially liked that you kept it realistic throughout the story (unless other stories where people die after making one small, tiny cut, which is really not possible...)
Also a great psychological first-person-view on self injuries and what Joey thinks about it. Poor Joey :.(
The way you describe Joey's and the others' characters is really convincing!
Keep up the good work! ^__^