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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
howdy. Me likey the story tis of much funnyness.
lurve ya an leave ya
lurve ya an leave ya
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious. *amused* Nicely done. I love all your little conversations with your Hikari at the start and end of chapters *giggles*
Very funny.
Very funny.
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the story, I mean loved it. So funny and witty, I can't wait to read Brotherly Love now, I hope you keep up the good work
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe.. I liked the sign!
Nice ending^^
Nice ending^^
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waiii!!!! *prays to Ra* Please bring Loezzy back! PLEASE!!!!
HM: Well now that it's over, she can stop reviewing.
*glares* How long do you want to live?
HM: ^^ As long as I can!
Then keep quiet about my reviewing! I still love teh fic like I love you both! I wish it was longer. I'll miss Pegasus and his drunkeness.
HM: Well now that it's over, she can stop reviewing.
*glares* How long do you want to live?
HM: ^^ As long as I can!
Then keep quiet about my reviewing! I still love teh fic like I love you both! I wish it was longer. I'll miss Pegasus and his drunkeness.
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey... already over??? ;__; ... that's really sad... sigh... I enjoyd this Fiction very much! ^^ Oh... but you kinda left an open end, didn't ya? So, maybe you will right a nother Party-Fiction... and, who knows... with which guests??? But I am looking forward to your SetoxMokuba Fiction... and, please, try to make the chapters a little bit longer? If you both may... that is... this is only a suggestion... nothing else! ^^
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O
.... oookkkyyy ....
either I have been almost asleep when I was reading your story ^^"""""""...
... or I am getting to old for this >.<°°° (meening my blindness ^^""""""")
... but I really didn't see the option of reviewing your story... so I'm very sorry for bothering you with an e-mail from me! ^^"""
Now then... I'll try another little review this way... hope you don't mind! ^^
The idea of a sleepover is very amusing, I think... what for multiple opportunities the chars have to do the strangest things is really great... and the game truth or dare is a perfekt start... and the punishment for not completing the dare or telling the truth is very interresting! ^^
I liked most of it the scene, where Seto had to lick Jou's face and act like a dog! That part was really good... but the bet the boys had going for if Yugi and Yami where a couple or not wasn't that bad either! ^^ Marik's stripp is good too. The Karaoke was a good idea ... and letting Seto sing the first song *grin* I would have loved to see that! ^^
... the chapters with the magazines/mangas were really chaotic... strange... and funny! ^^ Especially where Jou reads the special manga that Seto has...
The lemon scene was okay... but to short... I would have liked to read some more (and a bit more detailed ^^""")! ^^ And how Jou woke up Seto the next morning was interesting! ^^ I'm really looking forward to your next (and last... sigh...) chapter of you story!
The only critisism that I have is: the chapters where way to short! A such funny and chaotic story could have been much longer! ^^
... that's it from me now... hope I didn't bother you to much with my e-mail and this review! ^^"""
.... oookkkyyy ....
either I have been almost asleep when I was reading your story ^^"""""""...
... or I am getting to old for this >.<°°° (meening my blindness ^^""""""")
... but I really didn't see the option of reviewing your story... so I'm very sorry for bothering you with an e-mail from me! ^^"""
Now then... I'll try another little review this way... hope you don't mind! ^^
The idea of a sleepover is very amusing, I think... what for multiple opportunities the chars have to do the strangest things is really great... and the game truth or dare is a perfekt start... and the punishment for not completing the dare or telling the truth is very interresting! ^^
I liked most of it the scene, where Seto had to lick Jou's face and act like a dog! That part was really good... but the bet the boys had going for if Yugi and Yami where a couple or not wasn't that bad either! ^^ Marik's stripp is good too. The Karaoke was a good idea ... and letting Seto sing the first song *grin* I would have loved to see that! ^^
... the chapters with the magazines/mangas were really chaotic... strange... and funny! ^^ Especially where Jou reads the special manga that Seto has...
The lemon scene was okay... but to short... I would have liked to read some more (and a bit more detailed ^^""")! ^^ And how Jou woke up Seto the next morning was interesting! ^^ I'm really looking forward to your next (and last... sigh...) chapter of you story!
The only critisism that I have is: the chapters where way to short! A such funny and chaotic story could have been much longer! ^^
... that's it from me now... hope I didn't bother you to much with my e-mail and this review! ^^"""
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is very funny... I'll miss it when its all over!
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay... second try... first one didn't go all to good! >.<
O.O
.... oookkkyyy ....
either I have been almost asleep when I was reading your story ^^"""""""...
... or I am getting to old for this >.<°°° (meening my blindness ^^""""""")
... but I really didn't see the option of reviewing your story... so I'm very sorry for bothering you with an e-mail from me! ^^"""
Now then... I'll try another little review this way... hope you don't mind! ^^
The idea of a sleepover is very amusing, I think... what for multiple opportunities the chars have to do the strangest things is really great... and the game truth or dare is a perfekt start... and the punishment for not completing the dare or telling the truth is very interresting! ^^
I liked most of it the scene, where Seto had to lick Jou's face and act like a dog! That part was really good... but the bet the boys had going for if Yugi and Yami where a couple or not wasn't that bad either! ^^ Marik's stripp is good too. The Karaoke was a good idea ... and letting Seto sing the first song *grin* I would have loved to see that! ^^
... the chapters with the magazines/mangas were really chaotic... strange... and funny! ^^ Especially where Jou reads the special manga that Seto has...
The lemon scene was okay... but to short... I would have liked to read some more (and a bit more detailed ^^""")! ^^ And how Jou woke up Seto the next morning was interesting! ^^ I'm really looking forward to your next (and last... sigh...) chapter of you story!
The only critisism that I have is: the chapters where way to short! A such funny and chaotic story could have been much longer! ^^
... that's it from me now... hope I didn't bother you to much with my e-mail and this review! ^^"""
O.O
.... oookkkyyy ....
either I have been almost asleep when I was reading your story ^^"""""""...
... or I am getting to old for this >.<°°° (meening my blindness ^^""""""")
... but I really didn't see the option of reviewing your story... so I'm very sorry for bothering you with an e-mail from me! ^^"""
Now then... I'll try another little review this way... hope you don't mind! ^^
The idea of a sleepover is very amusing, I think... what for multiple opportunities the chars have to do the strangest things is really great... and the game truth or dare is a perfekt start... and the punishment for not completing the dare or telling the truth is very interresting! ^^
I liked most of it the scene, where Seto had to lick Jou's face and act like a dog! That part was really good... but the bet the boys had going for if Yugi and Yami where a couple or not wasn't that bad either! ^^ Marik's stripp is good too. The Karaoke was a good idea ... and letting Seto sing the first song *grin* I would have loved to see that! ^^
... the chapters with the magazines/mangas were really chaotic... strange... and funny! ^^ Especially where Jou reads the special manga that Seto has...
The lemon scene was okay... but to short... I would have liked to read some more (and a bit more detailed ^^""")! ^^ And how Jou woke up Seto the next morning was interesting! ^^ I'm really looking forward to your next (and last... sigh...) chapter of you story!
The only critisism that I have is: the chapters where way to short! A such funny and chaotic story could have been much longer! ^^
... that's it from me now... hope I didn't bother you to much with my e-mail and this review! ^^"""
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>.< this is the third and last time, I am trying to get my whole review up... if it doesen't work... don't blame me! Well, I love this story... but I'll miss it, when you two have finished it! So, here goes nothing! ^^
O.O
.... oookkkyyy ....
either I have been almost asleep when I was reading your story ^^"""""""...
... or I am getting to old for this >.< (meening my blindness ^^""""""")
... but I really didn't see the option of reviewing your story... so I'm very sorry for bothering you with an e-mail from me! ^^""" Now then... I'll try another little review this way... hope you don't mind! ^^ The idea of a sleepover is very amusing, I think... what for multiple opportunities the chars have to do the strangest things is really great... and the game truth or dare is a perfekt start... and the punishment for not completing the dare or telling the truth is very interresting! ^^ I liked most of it the scene, where Seto had to lick Jou's face and act like a dog! That part was really good... but the bet the boys had going for if Yugi and Yami where a couple or not wasn't that bad either! ^^ Marik's stripp is good too. The Karaoke was a good idea ... and letting Seto sing the first song *grin* I would have loved to see that! ^^ ... the chapters with the magazines/mangas were really chaotic... strange... and funny! ^^ Especially where Jou reads the special manga that Seto has... The lemon scene was okay... but to short... I would have liked to read some more (and a bit more detailed ^^""")! ^^ And how Jou woke up Seto the next morning was interesting! ^^ I'm really looking forward to your next (and last... sigh...) chapter of you story! The only critisism that I have is: the chapters where way to short! A such funny and chaotic story could have been much longer! ^^
... that's it from me now... hope I didn't bother you to much with my e-mail and this review! ^^"""
O.O
.... oookkkyyy ....
either I have been almost asleep when I was reading your story ^^"""""""...
... or I am getting to old for this >.< (meening my blindness ^^""""""")
... but I really didn't see the option of reviewing your story... so I'm very sorry for bothering you with an e-mail from me! ^^""" Now then... I'll try another little review this way... hope you don't mind! ^^ The idea of a sleepover is very amusing, I think... what for multiple opportunities the chars have to do the strangest things is really great... and the game truth or dare is a perfekt start... and the punishment for not completing the dare or telling the truth is very interresting! ^^ I liked most of it the scene, where Seto had to lick Jou's face and act like a dog! That part was really good... but the bet the boys had going for if Yugi and Yami where a couple or not wasn't that bad either! ^^ Marik's stripp is good too. The Karaoke was a good idea ... and letting Seto sing the first song *grin* I would have loved to see that! ^^ ... the chapters with the magazines/mangas were really chaotic... strange... and funny! ^^ Especially where Jou reads the special manga that Seto has... The lemon scene was okay... but to short... I would have liked to read some more (and a bit more detailed ^^""")! ^^ And how Jou woke up Seto the next morning was interesting! ^^ I'm really looking forward to your next (and last... sigh...) chapter of you story! The only critisism that I have is: the chapters where way to short! A such funny and chaotic story could have been much longer! ^^
... that's it from me now... hope I didn't bother you to much with my e-mail and this review! ^^"""