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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's not one of your better stories in my opinion, but it was good. I read it through till the end and that's a good sign. I think that sometime you should re-write it, 'cause it could've been written better.
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whao. finished reading your fanfic, well writen. interesting twist, i liked it when yami and yugi were reunited, tragic but bliss. alsorts in that one well done, and is there a sequal?
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a gip no lemon......Oh well, good story though, very well written Yamimi must say
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story very much!!!
The plot is very original and I'd love it if you'd continue this wonderful fic.
Just one suggestion. I´ve noticed you only put spaces to indicate lapses of time. Why don't you try spacing between paragraphs? That way it would be easier to read. (My eyes got >_<). If you'd like to indicate a change in time use a line with some asterisks (*******************). It really works ^_^!!!
I'll be looking forward the next chapter.
Greetings to Yugi and Yami (hope they can get their mind out of the gutter sometime ^_^!!!!!!)
The plot is very original and I'd love it if you'd continue this wonderful fic.
Just one suggestion. I´ve noticed you only put spaces to indicate lapses of time. Why don't you try spacing between paragraphs? That way it would be easier to read. (My eyes got >_<). If you'd like to indicate a change in time use a line with some asterisks (*******************). It really works ^_^!!!
I'll be looking forward the next chapter.
Greetings to Yugi and Yami (hope they can get their mind out of the gutter sometime ^_^!!!!!!)
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoahhh! What a great story. And I could read 5 chapters at once. *squeals* I do soooo love YamixYugi