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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more please! I have heat...down there. *blushes*
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool. but could you please make the chapters longer. thank you ^.^
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*kidnaps Mokuba and molests him* Oh the sexiness. Now we just need more. Seriouly Yami. You keep us all in suspense. Writing short chapters so we keep coming back. I want more!
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, you DID have the time to get the beginning of your SetoxMokuba Fiction online tonight! Great! ^^ I'm already really excited and can't wait til you continue!
For the beginnig, it starts nice... and it seems that the chap is a bit more longer than the chaps of sleepover... BUT they still could be a little longer! (<~~ only a suggestion! ^^)
And, I do think that you can write a serious story... so please go on with it! ^^
For the beginnig, it starts nice... and it seems that the chap is a bit more longer than the chaps of sleepover... BUT they still could be a little longer! (<~~ only a suggestion! ^^)
And, I do think that you can write a serious story... so please go on with it! ^^