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by atemuxyuugi

person Gaia
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...*chuckles* now Yugi knows how the voice of eyptian dreamer sounds. I love it. Please update soon. JA
person Juuni
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me love it. Me love it. MORE MORE PLEASE!
person Nepha
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! What happen next? Please update PLEASE PRETTY!! JA ne
person chi
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!
ure sooooooo cruel! how could u leave it dere?!
pls pls pls hurry wiv da nxt chappie!
pls!!!!!
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! And what a cliffie! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!
person NJ
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeaks* <3 You must update!! Reading this is making my head spin... b/c it is exactly (well, near exactly) like online relationships I've had before. I also love the way you put in things such as *blushes* *whispers* and emoticons in the text.. makes things so much clearer! Again, update soon, okay? :D
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
T__T WAAAHHHH!!!! Such an evil cliffie!!!! hurry and update soon!!!! please? ^__^
person Dadella
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I
love
this
STORY!!!!

It's so well written, but it DOES almost sound like it's clipped... like there's a mild language barrier, but that could be something else...

It's amazing, though, how awesomely you're conveying his emotions... his nervousness, his excitement, his FRUSTRATION!!
I can actually feel it myself...
I keep having to stop reading for a minute, clamp my hand over my mouth to keep from squealing out loud, and squeeze my eyes shut...
but then I get over myself and look back at the screen, only to find a few minutes later that I have to do it again...

I'm loving this, and I'm DEFINATELY adding it to my reader's list!! (IT'S SO LOOONG!!! ^^;)
(REALLY looking forward to more chapters!!)

person person
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEE!!!! ^_^ Oooooooooh, that is so cool! Great new twist!! You rock you rock you rock you ROCK!!!!!!!!! ^___________^ I am VERY pleased with this chappy.
person DracOnyx
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII! Okay, can't wait for the next chapter . . . this is such a great story! I love it! Please update soon!

DracOnyx

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