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for Unbreak My Heart

by LadyLaran

person Rubi
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I the undersigned, do hereby review the above story.

it rocks! Keep up the good work!

Rubicant
person Shinigami24
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* Ryou was right! Bakura's bored alright! Since he just stole something from the gods! Bet Ryou didn't SEE that one coming! *muses* So what'll happen now? And pls bring the yamis back! Since their hikaris and friends miss them!
person aspiker
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story. The character development, writing and plotting are excellent. The beta'ing is pretty good too. ;-)
Definately looking forward to the next chapter... 8-)
person DracOnyx
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU BET YOU'RE BEING HOUNDED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER, DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!!

*sigh* although, i suppose this is payback for all the evil cliffies I leave you people with. I always knew my evilness would bite me in the ass one of these days. I REALLY loved the scene with Bakura, and as I said, you're more than welcome to the name.

*glomphs and huggles, making sure she stays away from the wombat cage*

DracOnyx
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So much for Paradise, ne? I wonder if Osiris and the other Gods are going to kick Yami and co out of the afterlife just so that they can have a break! Boredom+Bakura+Marik+Yami=trouble in paradise. :)
person anubiset
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this. I read one similiar to it some where, but this is definately different. I love what Duke said. That should hold true even without the circumstances.
person zehlyah
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see where this leads. Please do continue
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. That was amazing. I was wondering which of them would snap first - I suppose I'm not surprised that it's Yugi. He had the closest relationship with his yami, after all.

Excellent chapter - please continue!
person Silvershadowfire
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! *cuddles Yugi* Poor Yugi. Poor all of them, but it might not be wise to leave Yugi alone. This was just as emotional as the first two, IMHO, but in a different way. I enjoyed it - sitting here with my tissues. This is a real tear-jerker you have going!

Please continue, and thanks for the chapter!
person DracOnyx
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful hun. what you added really finished off the chapter nicely, and I'm glad I could be of help! keep up the great work!

DracOnyx

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