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ooooooh.... MORE! don't stop now (wiggle eyebrows)

This was actually kinda neat! I really liked it...

You know it.

I really like the way you illustrate Tea's change from random backgroun cheerleader (ok, she does more than that . . . I guess) to being someone. I want more so I can see how Mai wreaks havoc on Tea's new life. That crazy Mai.

hey Princess Psycho, i have a marik fic for you. it's called "The Freaky-Stretching-Eyes Drabble"... umm, sorry it's a bit silly, but i hope you like it! also, sora - assuming i'm female...? (sheesh! in this cyber day and age... really)

Ok Sora...that's REALLY, incredibly stupid. flamers are pathetic, they're 14 year old losers that sit behind their computers and leave fic reviews, IM/chat insults, and message board bull shit filled with stuff they'd NEVER have the balls to say in real life...grow up, sheesh! and Now for the author....this is definitely interesting. ^^ and some GREAT, award winning stories are 500 words or under. Infact, some of the best work i've ever read is short stories, so the length is NOT a problem. The problem is, readers tend to look for long fics, read 6,000 something word chapters, and wait for updates, and don't understand that this lovely little mini-fic is simply not what they're looking for. It does NOT suck, and you do NOT suck as a writer. *gives sora the finger* And for the record, I love your other stuff too. ^^ I'm just too lazy to review. :P Great job!

Yes, flamers are pathetic indeed. The only thing that sucks is Sora...To be honest, I´m not a big fan of Mokuba, sorry! Could you write a fic about Marik? He's my favourite character. I read your fic about the Dark Magician to. You translated his name to 'Zwarte Goochelaar', which is Dutch. Are you Dutch? I'm just curious because I am Dutch^^

thanks for reviewing (and supporting me) guys! glad you find the story interesting - even if it is short! yeah, i like the long stuff too - although i do tend to get annoyed waiting for updates... too impatient, i am!...
princess, you don't like mokuba!?!? heehee! i would like to be incredulous, but i never really liked him until i started reading kaiba bros fic (stumbled on via kaijou/joukai)... and then when i tried to write, mokuba seemed to be the character that most resonated with me (strange, since i am not a younger sibling, or a 12 year old kid...). i tend to make him a bit older in my fics - 16, 17 etc.
i would like to write you a marik fic, only it would probably be very short and rather silly... i haven't read up to marik in the manga (which i find a bit more inspiring in terms of EVIL CHARACTERS!!! than the anime - esp the 4kids dubs)... and i'm glad you read the dark magician fic! although i am not dutch, my mother was born in holland, so i have a few dutch relatives!!!
thanks again, guys!

Since you wanted helpful criticism...
The story was very short, I advice you to make your next story, or next chapter longer.

Won't help Princess Psycho...She sucks to much XD

ok! it's short! does that make it a worse story?! i like 26 chapters just as much as the next fan, but i also like drabbles and ficettes that don't require months of reading... waiting... reading... i like ones that just explore a particular moment. BUT since you want longer fics, i am posting one called "Wait For You Forever"... it's a Mokuba-centric fic. ha! you gotta love Mokuba!!!