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for The New Girl - Perfection has Landed!

by Whytney

person J.S.
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i ave to ask dis...
wot da fuck r u guys on?!?!?!?!?
T.T seriously it must b some pretty strong stuff...
anyway
i think da story is...um....interesting
well at least it's entertaining
and there seems to b a plot line...somewhere
hope u guys continue though
i find da comments hilarious
update soon
person DSC
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Highly amusing and patriotic Americans aren't nice are they?

Keep writing.
person Ryoko
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love the way you're picking apart this horribly written Mary Sue... Honestly, you'd have to be delusional to even be writing something as horrible as this!

I attempted it a long time ago... and never finished! Wow... Mary Sue's are sad fics really, makes me wonder about their authors...

Keep up the awesome-ness!
person Bunny on Speed
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*lol* Get a life... nothin' better to do, than to bash anything?
person Lori
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nope, she's not from Canada. :P You're off by a few thousand miles...and canada's kickass! ^_^ *does a little happy dance, holding the canadian flag* I WISH I was Canadian. -__- Feh.

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