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person Shinigami24
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shaking head* RA! I could have sworn that the staff knew better than to let Bakura get ahold of the script! *peeks at tea leaves then screams* BAKURA You have the GRIM! Death is in your future! *giggles* I couldn't resist...But Kura better hope that Malik is a good kisser, otherwise Ryou will kill Bakura for messing up Tea's script! And...I strognly doubt Ryou liked Malik in the 1st place...
person Darkstar
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*rolls around floor clutching belly*That.......was so funny...*cant breath*i just love it and that part about yugi being pregnent was priceless*thnking* i only wish there was a pic of his face.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute! Go figure though- I'm watching soaps as I type this. ('One Life to Live' to be exact, LOL) Bakura would make a grrrreat Todd Manning, considering how many times they both have died and came back from the grave. *snicker*
person Terry
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMAO! That was fantastic! Great way to wake up in the morning! They should have known better than to hand ANYTHING to Bakura.
person Silvershadowfire
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Owwie...smothering laughter that hard in a public place hurts. That was hilarious! Bakura had better hope that Malik is good - it's the only thing that might let him forgive his yami for this!

I can see Yami and Yugi collapsing in laughter offstage - and I wonder what the grade was...?

The last line was perfect....I just have to think of it and I start laughing again!

Anyway, please accept my congradulations on a wonderful story - and pass that on to DracOnyx from her stalker, would you? Arigato!

Ja! - Silvershadowfire
person DracOnyx
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*falls off her chair laughing*

Bakura *coughs* - guess I get to do the review. Nice job, all in all. Tell the blonde I applaud. Although I'm wary of what other plot bunnies you and Drac will come up with . . . hasn't anyone figured out yet that the two of you on a late night phone call is dangerous? At least I write good plays *grins* Now, I just have to get Drac back in her damn chair . . . *grumbles before going to try and put Drac back in one piece*
person Camille
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHHAHAHAH!!! You must do a second chapter where Ryo kills Bakura! HAHAHAHAHA!! I enjoyed this! I'm glad Bakura got a creative streak at the last minute! Were they watching All My Children? ;)
person Lady Laran
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! What a way to wake up!!! I found this and Drac urged me to read it, which I'd already started doing. HOLY CRAP!!! Poor Ryou!!! Set up that way....I couldn't stop laughing!!! More plot bunnies!!!!!!

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