rate_review Reviews

Ooh, that was an awesome story! Full of ups and downs, angst and love. Extremely enjoyable read. Loved it!

*cries* OMG THIS WAS WONDERFUL! *tackles Seto and Joey* YOU TWO ARE SO FREAKIN CUTE TOGETHER! Now...all I need is kids from you two and I'll die happy!

Joey: *blushes* Ummm Nite..

NN: Ah hell, Seto has all that techonolgy I'm sure you he can think of something!

Seto: *grins and strokes Joey's ass*

Joey: HEY HEY! *Smirks* You wanna piece?

Seto: *growls playfully* HELL NO! I WANT THE WHOLE THING! *tackles Joey*

NN: ^_^ I must say your story got a lot of emotion out of me, which is rare for stories to do, congrads on that! Lol I keep yellin at Seto and then he would do something nice and I'd be like awww...ok...never mind..all if forgiven...same way with Joey. I like who you put Duke into this and the things with Joey's family, amazing, wonderful. Seto was nicely potrayed and I like how you did his life as well. I enjoyed reading your story very much and...hey...hey! His leg is not suppose to bend that way! *Sees the glares and goes back to trypin* umm...anyway...I loved Joey's atttitude, at some things I was like yes, that is so Joey. Also for a second I thought Seto said something like No silly that's not what I want...I nearly freaked out in laughter...I can picture Seto sayin something like that...and it cracks me up! >< Once again nice job with this!

i almost started crying right now.... that was such a good story!!!! *wails* the ending was so kawaii!!!!! ..... *stops a second and gets a thoughtful expression on her face* now if only i could convince some of my friends to do that......... oh yah! im writing a review! *snaps out of daydream* anyway.... good one & keep 'em coming (or cumming in some instances^^) lol! bye bye!

Very very well told story. Thank you for the great read.

Maggiemay

when i started reading the story i just teared up b/c of joey, while i read i pictured him in that situation, poor guy. but i am glad that he is happy now that he will be mr. jou kaiba. love your work

Damnit! I'm swooning! What have you done with your incredible writing skills. That was very sweet and sappy, but good. Great job.

This story is just incredible, I loved every single part of it. I wanted to read the whole thing right away but as the chapters slipped away I didn't want them to end.

You told us a new story of Jou's life in away that works, not an easy thing to do I might add. Many have tried only a handful of people have ever done it successfully.

My favorite part was the visit with Jou's grandfather, I knew it was coming and I really wanted Jou to be with him, but the way you wrote it was just as satisfying. It touched a special part of my own heart, (I know that feeling of loss) It had me in tears..

I don't think I have read anything that has brought tears to my eyes like this since (freewater's An Innocent Joke... Read it?....DO it's here on Aff.net it's awesome the best fan-fiction story I have ever read in any fandom)

I Hope to see more of your work and hopefully a sequel. I'm adding this to my own list of REC fanfiction.
Thanks, ~IVY~

Wonderful story. Sweet and bitter, just like a great dark chocolate. Characters seemed slightly off, but the plot was tops. I loved the Otogi bashing even if I do like the character.

That was one of the most beautiful and perfect stories i had read.... It was so good. I was so enraptured in the story. I can't wait to read more of your stories later on.

Oh, by the way, just out of curiosity, chapter 3 seemed to be cut off at the beginning and i was wondering if that was intentional. It felt like something was missing from the begining of that chapter. If it isn't, well, never mind. But I do hate to miss out any part of this story.

WOW! What an emotional ride. The right amount of angst and love. Great job. Thankyou.