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for How to Raise a Well-Mannered Puppy

by Rroselavy

person Maggiemay
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. Thank you. I just love a cuddling Seto.

Maggiemay
person silverfox
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW THATS WAS GREAT!!! this is such a great story please update soon like NOW
person Nocturne22
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You must continue!!!!!!!!! I forgot about this story for awhile, but then re-read it and DAMN! It is so good! I want to see what happens next so please write more and update!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Celestial Angel
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ya better update next week! I just love it how you update right after you put one in! its awesome!!
person Yukiko
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good thing there, but waht the hell happens ? He fighted with his dad ? did that himself ? what ? what ? WHAT ?
person Geuna
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELL YEAH!!! I not so overly evil abusive dad and a Jounouchi that isn't a big woman and just takes it. One guilty guy with issues and a son that will beat the crap out of him if need. I like yooou. ^__^ I don't think I've seen ANYONE write it this way before!

Geuna~
person Maggiemay
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review the last chappie...just read it today. Still a great read. Keep up the wonderful work.

Maggiemay
person nicky
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
once again, I liked how you portrayed Jou's dad! He's not totally bad, he's sick and needs help.

Also i loved how Kaiba behaved. so caring and understanding and all... *sighs*
person Lennith
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh! Haha, sorry, my comment got eaten last time for some reason. Ahem, anyway! Wonderful story! I know there are a lot of KaiJou stories out there, but it's so hard to wade through all the junk to find a good fic. And your update rate is so enviable! Thank you so much for your hard work and great story! Good luck with your classwork, I know how rough it can be...
person Kodachi
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geez, what did Kaiba expect? He disciplined Kobi. Of course, he became the dog's master. *snorts*

Looks like Kaiba figured it out. It was sorta relieving that he would choose to find Jou anyways. However, I think he would be shocked at what he saw in Jou. *sighs* I doubt he would be used to comforting someone. After all, Jou just lashed out at Kaiba too. Talk about low self-esteem already.

Does Jou hate his mother a lot? He seems to resent it a lot.

Kodachi

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