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for Everybody's fool

by yamiyugi

schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seto. I hope he can get rid of his mask and let the real him shine through.
person Liona
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello there!
Yeah, I've got to say that your story isn't bad. I haven't understand
everything because I'm german, but although I enjoyed reading it.
You described Seto in a way that I can understand well. It's nice that
you didn't make him friendly and... you know what I mean, don't you?
I've read too much of those things...
But he's a bit too honestly to himself in your story, don't you think so?

I think, I've got to say "thank you" for this nice and short story.
So, thank you.

Liona
person Yamima
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was pretty good

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