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for The Secret

by freewater

person DancingPenguin
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEP! Kaiba finding out!?!?! Jounouchi thinking she's a guy when she's actually a she!?!?!? Psychological craziness!?!??!?!?!?!??!

Man, Freud would have a field day with both of them... (Jounouchi for reasons listed above, and Kaiba... well, Kaiba needs to see a shrink.)
person tash922
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u have to continue i love this story its amazing ineed to kmow what happens to jou and what is seto planing...? AAAAAhhhh!!!!! its driving me crazy (take deep breath) ok am clam please continue ^.^
person rivgirl
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok good story here can't wait to see what is to happen next
person kuroi-sakurapetals
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wohoo this is getting good!!! well it's good already i mean its getting really good. please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
person yumi
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i realie luv ur story seto n joey are a realie good couple just it would be cooler if joey was a gurl plz write more
person Sushigurl
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oo wat's Kaiba going to do to poor Joey!?! There better be some smut in the next chapter!!!! Please make the next chapter soon!!! =)
person J.S.
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bandages? wouldnt dat hurt?
anyway nice chappie, cant wait 4 an update
i wonder wot kaiba's gonna make joey do? i ave a bad feeling....
person Amane
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can´t really say "Warnings : This is a YAOI story (sort of)" if you turn Joey into a girl. Also, you should have remembered to write 'GenderSwitch' in the summary, the whole 'crossdressing' thing is very misleading. Most people would expect that Joey is a guy and will be blackmailed into dressing as a girl.
person koalared
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still very interesting keep going please.
person zombiedarkelf18
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhh whats doning to happen
really enjoy your fan fics your a great writer
:)

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