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November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The manga alludes to Jounouci-san Sr being a lazy alcoholic.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was great! when are you going to continue with this fic?
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cool fic but what you think about joey s father(Most fics I’ve read with him in it, have him getting abused by his drunken father. I really don’t want to write his father that way because I don’t think he is abusive or a drunk.)
isnt truw
i have a manga book from yu gi oh and joey s father is wreely a drunk abusive man
it isnt made up its a fact but your fic is cool so keep going
isnt truw
i have a manga book from yu gi oh and joey s father is wreely a drunk abusive man
it isnt made up its a fact but your fic is cool so keep going
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December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woo!! love it!! keep it up
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi I love this story you so have to keep goign and mokuba in leather *drool* As for Jou's dad being a drunk he really is I don't know if you've ever seen Shonen jump magazines but they're the original version of yugioh and Jou's dad is a drunk bastard but yuo only see him once that I know of and I don't think he actually hit's Jou havn't seen it anyway but anyway keep going with this story it's really great and I love it.
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY!! ^_^ I absolutely Love it, and you did really do a great job with the characters personality's. But of course you already know that. Well UPDATE SOON. I can't wait to see the next chapter. ^___^ I'll review more soon.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey dear ,nice chapter.i loved naughty kaiba.well you know im a naughty person hehehe. I m happy you re finishing your job period. it means more sh for me. ok i know im evil. see you in the next
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeeaaah! I love it! The humour is fresh, nice and not overpowering. I also like the character interactions and the witty banter. Some of the conversation and/or mental thoughts seem a little awkward, but other than that, I like. Keep up the great work. :)
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, where to begin? Ahhh! I love this story. I am currently dying for
an update. You've left in a giggling girly fit - no fair! I love your humor
and the suspense is quite literally killing me. Please, please update soon.
From one book-nut to another? You have a job in a library - I'd never leave.
an update. You've left in a giggling girly fit - no fair! I love your humor
and the suspense is quite literally killing me. Please, please update soon.
From one book-nut to another? You have a job in a library - I'd never leave.
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! YOU FRIGGIN STOPPED THERE!!!!!!???????? **cries crocidile tears** NOT FAIR!!!!! WAAAAHHHHH!!! It was gettin soooooooooo good and I waz drooling and loling and all excited and then.....those cursed 3 words!!! **dum dum duuummmm!!!** TO BE CONTINUED!!! How could you!! Please please please please (times 1000000000000000000 to the 10000000th power) finish the next chappy soon!! I really really really (this could take a while.......) REALLY REALLY wanna read more!!
~ChibiRinni ^.^
JOU/SETO 4 EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
~ChibiRinni ^.^
JOU/SETO 4 EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!