rate_review Reviews

I have only one thing to say, I'm very impressed with this story. I didn't even like the show that much, but I did like the chemistry between Mai and Jou. As for Mai, I like her complicated personality and life and I think the pairing is great.

ohhh i'm sooo happy that joey and mai are starting to develope a relationship! thank goodness~ cuz sex alone isnt enough yo!

I really enjoyed that story. I love MaixJou stories, so if you write any more, please let me know. You're a really talented writer, something you don't see too often with fan fics.

When you finish somethings missing i decided 2 look at ur profile and read ur other stroies and i rilly lik this story so far and hope ul keep it goin 4 a lil while longer.
i think this is the best joey/mai story on the site :D

Excellent fanfic. You put a lot of work into this, and it shows. I want to thank you for writing a het fic, especially for an unpopular pairing like JouxMai. I like yaoi, but it's nice to see het (and yuri) as well.

I really liked this story. I know that there are not many mai and joey or other male female couples out there..

Very nice fic. I like it muchly. I'm wrting a j/m fic I like the couple. Kudos.

for a first timer at writing sex sceans your pertty good at them...and i love this story i wish there was more JxM fics outher but saddly there aren't but you did a great job keep up the good work

You know, for awhile now, I've been trying to figure out what it was exactly that I didn't like about your lemons, and now, with this last chapter, I've finally figured it out. You spend a good chunk of it writing detailed forplay, but then you don't spend more than a few sentences on the actual sex. But I guess that it works with this kind of story. It's not like this is bad or anything, it's just that I personally don't like it. Anyways, this was another beutifully writen chapter, and I'd expect nothing less from you at this point. I know you said before that you didn't know when you'd write more stories, but I beg of you to do it soon. As I've said before, I've booked marked your Author's page, so I'll be checking it every once in a while. But if you end up posting on some other site, please email me with a link. I honestly adore your writing, and wish that I was atleast half as half as you are.

I like the ending!

At first, after what you wrote i was a little worried that it might be... not enough to like it... (that sounds weird, but i really don't know how to explain it any better)

But then, when i read the ending, I totally liked it. Because it fits... not only the characters but also the style of the story. so... YAY You!