rate_review Reviews

If that was your first explicit section, it was very tasteful - you actually had (shock horror) emotion behind the sex! XD That's always good and it shows promise, wonderful promise in fact!

It doesn't matter if it's popular. You write because you want to and don't let anyone bad mouth you!

Well, I read the third chapter. It was...interesting, but not in a bad way. The female anatomy kind of grosses me out, so it was hard to read some parts. Still, I got through it and I think it was well written for your first explicit sexual scene. Even if it were not your first, it is still very good. I like the way Mai is 'breaking down.' What I mean is: I like the way her emotions are becoming overwhelming and she wants Joey the way he wants her. I hate it when authors make it seem that Joey is the only emotional or hormone driven character. Anywho, another great chapter. I look forward to the update.

Just read it twice. Lol. Lip stick rumpled clothing! Woo!

IT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! I LOVE JOEY AND MAI!!

I'm not much of a YuGiOh fan [despite that, I can't stop watching it], but something about this pairing just...draws me to it. And I must say, I am extremely disappointed with how few others feel the same way (especially how few there are on here). So I'm very relieved to find one that's actually well-written! Please hurry up and finish this fic, I want to find out what happens next...even if it seems obvious. =D

This is a really good story. You explain the relationship between Mai and Jounouchi well and realistically, with doubts and emotions. I really like this! Please continue.

LMAO! Poor Jou! I'm absolutely loving this fic so far! You write really well, and it has been so long since i've read a good JouXMai story! They are definately an under-rated couple ^^ I look foward to more chapters!

I have to admit that i usually don't read Jou/Mai anymore, not because i don't like them, on the contrary I like them lots... I just prefer Jou/Seto...

So, this review from a J/S yaoi fan really means something! ^_~

I think you characterized them very well and made this fic a nice mixture of humour and cute hotness. I like it lots and want to read more!