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not continued??*sniff*

well, I must say... up to now, there isn't much to say, right? it happened not enough xD
But I like Marik *___* and I like Bakura, too, but Marik's... hmmm *grins*
aww, you have to continue this >.<
you can't leave those poor readers (hello *waves hand*) with just this little chapter and then nothing any more >.<

AGH! Brooooother! -Shakes an effin' fist.-

How dare yew insult the malrus, and Malik!? ;-; And Mariku? Hmph. Well, I hope Ryou turns out to be an ugly duckling, with big buck teeth, and poopy-brown feathers... and, uhm. He can't fly! Ha! .____.

Bakura happens to be the worser-er one! I mean, he's a fookin' stick with white hair~! Soooo, when you think about insulting Mariku, or if you think about talking about the walrus thing again, I'll hurt you... and you won't get any secks? ;-;

Don't listen to hiiiim...

~Daaaaku, the cranky little monster who just finished his seventh cup of coffee.

Heh heh...cuuuute. Pirates gross me out, but that's irrelavent right now. I like how you started this out. The words the face spoke were pretty damn cool. (oooh, and 'day rhyme, dat's kickass! GO YOU!^_^)
Go on now, get the next chapter up and amuse me some more!

kool that you make another fic this one ish good as well....-sweatdrops.- remind me to Aladin O.o.....still ish kool
hope you update this time!! -smacks him on the back of his head.- good work....

MASTAAAAAAAA!!! IT'S PRETTY! ;-;

-Wail.- I wish I could write as nice as yoooooou... It's so pretty. And I was interested. Except, could yew separate your paragraphs a little more, so I can find it easier to follow? ;-;

I am the ruler. I helped! HA! Anyone who has questions, can find me in the box behind your local Petsmart. I also provide my services... for five dollahs. o-o;;;

KEEP GOING MASTAA! <3

Mastaa, Mastaa, look at me, look at me! No, not over there, over here! -Waves!- Whee, this is much BETTER written than your other story! I love it alot more, I do, I do! I think I'm with Brother though on the paragraphs! Seperate better! My poor eyes burn when they look at those big blocks of letters! I lose my place at least twenty times! -Sweatdrop.- Mmph, interesting, ver-ry interesting! Mou, only, Bakura is better than Mariku. oo;;;Mariku is teh Sux0rZ. Mou, I can't wait to read about Ryou the duck princess, and Malik the walrus! He is a walrus still right?! XD -Kidding..-

LOVE YOU AND BEAUTIFUL START!?! WRITE MORE SOON!

~Lovely, lovely Lickeh!