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Please keep going i love this so far.

Reviewing again. I told you I would, lol. I'm not rushing you or anything...I just really want to read more! At first, I wasn't sure what to expect, considering it's a time-travel fic (sort-of). I always suspected that Yami had a bit of a cruel streak like Bakura and Marik (I mean, look at how he duels, utterly ruthless sometimes). I could see Atemu with an 'I'm the pharaoh, and I can do this just because, well, I can' attitude. You made him very interesting, a bit scary because of the power he weilds, but attractive because of that hidden vulnerable side. Okay, Atemu-fangirl moment over. Your scenebuilding skills are excellent, your characterizations are decidedly above average, and yu have a great deal of talent. I guess that's why the next chapter will be worth the wait.

darn typos...

Wow This is absolutely one of my favorite fanfics ever I cannot wait till the next chapter Your doing such a great job! Please continue soon And keep up the great work You are simply amazing!

I'll review for you every day for the next two weeks if you post another chapter.I'm completely serious; I'll review so much you'll get sick of me. But it's your own darn fault for being such a great writer lol.

Aww poor Yugi, oh and are Tristan and Bakura going to show up later. Or Mai and Serenity. I hate those, well I hate all the girls in the show. They either made them sluts or too dramatic goody goody´s. If I ruled the show the girls would all die, be replaced by better ones with better names and you would see blood. But sadly I don´t. Anyway great story, can´t wait till the next chapter and youre going in my favorites

great job man you made me cry as yugi was wipped , good luck in your job by the way

Interesting, I like your story so far. It's cute to read a story beginning with Yugi questioning if he and Yami can have a relationship or even if he's gay, since most of us are so used to them being a cannon couple we don't think about it anymore. The few tiny inconsistancies I've noticed aren't really even wrong, just a different take on the way the soulrooms work, and that's okay. I /have/ noticed a few typos, however, and I'd be happy to correct them for you or do a quick proofread on your next chapter, if you're interested. Email me. Ja ne! ~LG

this fic is ssssssssssssoooooooooo good it hurts >_0 pleaaaaaase finish i'm dying here =3

Ow, ow, ow. You have ripped out my heart and stomped on it, and yet I feel the urge to give you a hearty round of applause. Because really, we *know* this is headed towards nakedness and such, and it's so much more satisfying when things are in-character at the first meeting, and... (...oh, screw it. I want Yugi to be okay! Help! Save him! Medic!)

...yeah.

At the same time, your writing continues to be wonderful. There's a *reason* why my checking of this category went from once monthly to twice daily, and it rhymes with 'Kechan'. I love the two timelines, I love Yami's guilt for doing things we haven't even gotten to see yet, and I love the fact that it can make me this miserable. Argh. Thank you, and I'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter. (Will I ever, man. Eek.)