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::rolling on the floor laughing:: This is great! Even better! You do marvelous work, dear! Keep it up!

...wow. I'm amused to find someone who liked that Buffy musical episode as much as me. But this fic had so much potential, and I was kind of let down by it. This is just cutting and pasting the lyrics and putting a different name for the person singing it. It would have been better if you, say, kept the songs but wrote out a slightly differing plot, or at least *any* detail about them dancing, or the dialogue in between the songs. I don't know how the people who haven't seen that Buffy episode are getting through this fic. I kept skimming through the chapters, hoping that it might change. But it didn't.
I hope I'm not being too harsh, but I just wanted to give you some feedback on this.

::busts out laughing:: OMG! Someone who watches Buffy and Yu-Gi-Oh! I'm not alone any more! Oh well, great fic idea. I just there had been more detail in it. ::imagines YGO gang dancing and laughs some more:: Still, marvelous idea and all. Keep up the good work!