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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has a lot of potential. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Update soon!
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic...can't wait for more. I hafta know what's goin to happen. Update soon!
~IceAngel~
~IceAngel~
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a good foundation here. I also think however that your chapters would benefit immensely from a little bit of beefing up. Otherwise good start!