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November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The bee story is familiar, but the ending went something like there being no more honey.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THat was great! beautifully done.
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i liked it alot it was cool the teacher waqs really stupid and thending was cute i hope u don't make this justa one-shot but i hope u write more stories
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done! At first, I was like, "WHAT A FUCKING PRICK (Seto..not you)!", but then, I knew you wouldn't be that cruel to Jou! I love the symmetry; did you make up the metaphor yourself? It was really clever! And I love how Seto realized his true feelings after their confrentation (or lack thereof) and admitted his 'loss' in the game; serves him right! Very good story! I'm glad it all worked out! ^_^
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, This is extremely adorable. Ha, that stupid teacher WAS a moron. I knew it was a sort of substitute, symbol as you call it, from the beginning. I've had teachers like that too... Meh...Evil... Er, HI! Sorry. Anyway, I'm gonna see if I can look into your other work although it's 5 am. ^^; Doncha love summer? Well, cute cute cute story. See ya!
Toralyn
Toralyn
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That has to be one of the sweetest lil ficlet I have ever read. Befuddled Seto and passive Jou. Gotta love that mix!
Bees I like
Wasps I hate... one crawled down my shirt and wouldn't move from its position between my breast..... -_-;;;
Bees I like
Wasps I hate... one crawled down my shirt and wouldn't move from its position between my breast..... -_-;;;
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kiaba can be such an ass but am glad he made up for it
this story was very sweet i hope u make more
this story was very sweet i hope u make more
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too lazy to log in..
Anyhow, I'm not quite sure if I like this or not. It was written very well, don't get me wrong! It's just... I dunno. Seto was so heartless! I guess he thought he had a good reason, but still... Ahh! Makes me want to punch him in the face. And poor, poor Jou... I guess the biggest problem I had with this was that Jou forgave him so easily, and quickly. He could have at least finished his apology. ;_; It's probably because Jou loves him so much or what not, but still! I guess I don't think Seto suffered enough for being such a meanie.
Anyhow, I'm not quite sure if I like this or not. It was written very well, don't get me wrong! It's just... I dunno. Seto was so heartless! I guess he thought he had a good reason, but still... Ahh! Makes me want to punch him in the face. And poor, poor Jou... I guess the biggest problem I had with this was that Jou forgave him so easily, and quickly. He could have at least finished his apology. ;_; It's probably because Jou loves him so much or what not, but still! I guess I don't think Seto suffered enough for being such a meanie.
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....BEES!
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*wibbles* this was sad, and happy, and sad again, then happy...:D I liked it!
Shippo-chan
Shippo-chan