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Alright so I've been reading all of your stories instead of studying for classes that just restarted and I in shock! I literally failed today but was still happy when I got home to read. I don't really get the TeaRoom thing but this was hot! Please come back and write more stories! Well maybe after I graduate again in a few years so I don't fail out lmao. You are the best. Direct me towards anyone even remotely as talented and NC-17 rated as you. I almost never rate or review but you should know how awesome you are. Oh well back to re-watching lectures I guess.. 

Read both Hunger and Thirst. While Hunger is amazing, Thirst really builds up the characters and develops what a relationship would mean for both of them. The concept for the story is amazing, really different, and i love the fact you didn't 'fix' Jou, and its nice to have Seto not portrayed as the knight in shining armor thats going to make all Jou's problems go away. All in all, a very well written story, and an amazing read! :D

I absolutely loved this story. This is my third time re-reading Thirst and Hunger and I found both very intriguing and unique. Please keep writing and never feel discouraged because so far, I've loved all your work

Just wanted to drop a line and let you know how much I've been enjoying your stories. I'm the type to read a fix or book twice before I form an opinion good enough to leave a review, but that wasn't necessary with this one. Despite it "not turning out how you intended"; this fic was a pleasure to read. I noticed the difference in names as perspectives changed, and it made the story engaging and easy to follow. You also seem to have an innate understanding of how to write "smut" in a tasteful manner, and I found the characterization of Jou believable and adorable, even with the more brutal nature of his fetish. You're able to make these characters believable - not an easy feat. I can't write puppyshipping to save my life. I hope you write more, and as soon as time permits, I'll try to leave reviews for the other fics of yours I've read.

This is for Hunger and Thirst. Once again I find myself at a loss for words. For such sordid stories to make me feel so... I don't know, accomplished maybe? Well, it's kinda new for me. I'm one that usually go with the romantic ones, but this felt so right that I'll soon probably have one of my moments "hey, which episode was it that Kaiba found out it was Joey in the glory hole again?" and then after a while remember that obviously no such thing happened. It happens to me. A lot.

When I realized I was on the last chapter, I actually whimpered, then looked at the page as if it had insulted me. Then I sighed and went on reading. I really loved how you left implied that they were living together at the end but didn't actually come out and said it, and I agree with you... 'fixing' Joe would have been... I don't wanna say unrealistic since it's a fanfiction, but I guess you know what I mean; I wish I were around when you were still writing it so I could maybe egg you on writing more chapters.

Okay, enough with the adulation. Now the bad points.

Uh... well I can't think of anything right now, other than cringing at imagining Joe sucking off old fat guys.

That's it

or

as they say nowadays...

good story!

Ykarzel, I believe this is the first time I have reviewed any of your stories, but I just wanted to say that I have been a silent admirer since your fanfiction titled ‘Ice.’ It is - to this day - a story that I find myself re-reading when I’m in the mood for some good ol’ classic smut.

I have read (and re-read) all of the fictions you’ve posted here on adultfan.net and find something special in every single one of them. I truly love the way you write, and find it an incredible treat that you had the motivation to post your work for fans like me.

I felt that, being a silent fan for so long, I should personally thank you for finishing Thirst (a story that I have enjoyed for its originality and satisfying scenes) and hope that you continue to write.

Thank you for creating such wonderful stories for this fandom.

Hot hot hot! I understood the use of hunger for a description of needing someone but thirst, I didn't get a first (hey I ryhmed (sp? I'm no good without a beta)) Anyway now everytime someone tells me they are thirsty I'll have to supress a giggle. And for that I thank you and am very glad you got back in the writing game.

Nicely done!

And though I wish there were more to the story, the way you've ended it fits in very well with the establish tone and pace of the story.

Thanks again for sharing!

'Ko

That was a lovely end.
And I don't really think you need to revise the earlier chapters; it shows that at first Seto wanted to cure Jou, too, before he realized that he didn't actually need curing.

Love the story!
~jea

You finished it! I took a break from checking AFF and you snuck in while I wasn't looking!

I've been hoping that you'd get back to this one for ages. And I'm so glad that you didn't "fix" Jou - in either sense of the word! This worked much better than "true love conquers all."

One note though, and if you don't want to hear about typos then please ignore this. In the chapter where the boys have their date and we see Seto's room, you accidentally wrote that they got "snacks and deserts" at the cafes, rather than "snacks and desserts." You're usually really good about editing, and it was so unexpected that I laughed out loud and had my roommate giving me funny looks.

Thanks for writing this. Hopefully you'll have more in store for us soon!

-Song