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for Ahmose Inarus

by hatochiisai

person Zoe
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so a month after I'd planned to review, I'm finally getting round to it. -_-;;
I enjoyed the scene where Yugioh stole Ahmose’s scrolls.
I hadn’t expected for for Ahmose’s Duel Monster to be Maha Vailo, but I have to admit, it does seem to be very appropriate really.
And I think I remember from Millennium Balance, a little about how that imperfect mastery of the teleportation spell figures in later events. There’s much angst on the way isn’t there.
person Drago
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!! I love this story! And I am happy to have help you get rid of the story thief(I am Silvonas). Can't wait for more stories from you.
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this! ^-^ hehe, the thought of Yami's voice changing is amusing. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
person Anira_OceanFang
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great fic please please please continue!
Chrono: She can get really sad if its not continued!
Anira: Silence you! Anyway please continue and I will help where I can!
person onee_p@yahoo.com
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww how cute Ahmose is! XD XD *has a thing for dangerous children* i'm glad this is being written cuz i've been curious about Ahmose's past and such for a while. this is really good so far. update! asap!
person Drago
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story just as much as I love all of your work. And I can not belive someone would try and steal it! They can't pull the wool over my eyes, I've been reading your work snice you were fighting with fanfiction.com. I hope that the thief is stopped soon.
person bjsu
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this storie its cute . keep up the good work . I hope you do one on how Marik and Bakura meet . see ya
person Anira_OceanFang
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Is that all there is though? I am just curious I really hope you add more!
person Audra
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far . Very good . I’m glad to finally get to know Ahmose . He seems like a very interesting individual . It’s funny how bratty him and Yami are together .
Dose this mean your going to post Millennium Balance too ??????????? I hope so . Anyways great chapter . Update soon !!!!!!!!!
person YamiKitsune
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! I have been waiting for this story ALL summer! ^-^ I'm so happy you're updating again~ hope you had a good summer vecation. ^-^

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